She looks so cute it is as if you've photoshopped
her features like on T.V..
I think this is perfect,but I'm sure some will say
there is too much white out in the bottom left and above the rim of her hat.
Great catch of those beautiful eyes.

Nice! She looks really sweet in you camera. Though I think you should soften those overexposed pieces of white, maybe even make a crop on the top... So you don't see the whole hat :) Love her face.

point well taken :) thank you Mysight and Soyrosa for the comments

The cut on her lip doesn't add anything to me, so it's a distraction. You could remove it in Photoshop or, if that's not an option, make it work (look for a mood and angle where it contributes rather than just sits there). Also the eyes seem almost but not quite sharp. It looks like the focus point may be a bit behind her eyes (the hair looks slightly more in focus). Finally, the girl looks in between expressions -- not quite comfortable and not settled into a mood either. I like the framing and the girl is very cute with wonderful eyes. I would suggest taking lots and lots of shots looking for a "moment" that stands out with the focus, etc. all working, and then add a little (not too much) sharpening in Photoshop to make the eyes come alive even more. Hope this helps.

this is a lovely portrait-would also like to se more of the hat :)

Beautiful portrait.

She looks cute and I liked the tight crop.