Uploaded by warreagle - 5 comments - Topic: Everyday Artifacts (8 months ago)
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Everyday Artifacts (8 months ago)
koo88 added a critique 8 months ago:
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 8 months ago:
this may be random...but I like the background!!
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 8 months ago:
Hi Amy,
While the composition is good, it's a little uninteresting, in my opinion. It just kind of sits there. The colors are ok but not exciting - and the light is good...but not great. As a result, the overall effect is kind of bland - not a bad shot, but not a great shot for the reasons given above.
Best to you,
Jon
MMeye (Martine) added a critique 8 months ago:
I do agree with Jon.
Moreover, the whole pic is out of focus.
Amy, be careful with the distance when you intend to make a macro shot : you probably were too close of your subject, and the camera could not focus correctly on the keys.
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 8 months ago:
Jon and MMeye, thanks for your input. I am learning a lot about macro technique.
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I do enjoy this. My only criticism is the blue is distracting and out of focus.