Photo #21651

Uploaded by warreagle - 5 comments - Topic: Abandoned places (11 months ago)

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Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 11 months ago:

The image just kinda all runs together, mostly because of the similar hues. Did you try this in B&W with some curves work to pull out the building from the background??? Also, there is too much foreground, which is not adding anything. The handy scroll bar tester says crop just above the whitish line running slightly up hill to the right. This gives a more pleasing framing to me.

warreagle (Amy Warr) said 11 months ago:

thanks for the ideas...have not tried it in b&w. will do that.

lightholder (Kimberly Lightholder) added a critique 11 months ago:

I like the colours in this, but I agree, it needs a bit of seperation. You might consider a closer crop to help bring the focus to the building.

In addition, if you can re-shoot, maybe try lowering the camera angle to give the building a bit more perspective against the trees... :)

warreagle (Amy Warr) said 11 months ago:

thanks. i can reshoot--this is what's left of a greenhouse the previous owners had in my parents' backyard...they been in the house about 9 years now.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Just misses - great color and feel to this shot, but the composition is awkward and the trees growing out of the structure are really a distraction.

Best,
Jon

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