
by warreagle
5 comments
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 3 months ago:
boyd added a critique 3 months ago:
Colours really kick here! I like the sweep of the fence and the fact that it is the same colour as the dominant trunk in the background. This adds to a wonderful set from this location. Well done, Amy.
killsamz (bizet samuel) added a critique 3 months ago:
i dont like there is no relief, no sun light, it's flavorless
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 3 months ago:
there was no sunlight that day, all cloudy
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 2 months ago:
This is a very nice subject, nice composition. The overall softness is disappointing, especially in the foreground fence rails. This reminds me of home, lots of fences like this where I grew up in Virginia.

by warreagle
5 comments
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 3 months ago:
a different part of cades cove
GarrettHall (Garrett Hall) added a critique 3 months ago:
Great idea, but it looks a bit blurry.
AmberDawn (Amber Sullivan) added a critique 3 months ago:
The greens are so pretty, I love barn photos. It is a bit blurry, and I would maybe try to get the camera lower and more of the barn detail.
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 3 months ago:
I love the contrast of the rusty roof and bright greens! I don't know of anything that can be added to whatever is already said, great photo overall!!
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 3 months ago:
Very pretty scene. Nicely captured. I would have cropped the top and bottom just a bit to create a little more scope and to loose the bit of sky in the upper left.

by warreagle
6 comments
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 3 months ago:
that's not a link. it just read it that way
GarrettHall (Garrett Hall) added a critique 3 months ago:
Since this is your first attempt, I would say this is a success! It might have been more interesting if the fence stayed in the frame... a little more foreground and less clouds. That would give you a nice balance of near, mid, and far. It might also improve the photos impact if you pulled some drama out of the clouds by adding contrast. Good first attempt, though. Keep at it.
snaps (Dana N) added a critique 3 months ago:
Agree with G about the contrast in the clouds, but love the format. Great subject for it.
boyd added a critique 3 months ago:
Yes, Amy, I also agree that you would have to count this as a success. I like the colours and the sweep of the mountains (hills??) that you have framed within the image. Well done.
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 3 months ago:
Great Smoky Mtns. National Park, another set from that trip to Cades Cove in TN. Thanks for the comments!

by warreagle
4 comments
boyd added a critique 3 months ago:
Hey Amy, this looks suspiciously like you have moved beyond the fence! I like the use of b&w here with a good tonal range, and the interest that the people bring to the shot (although I would like to see them a little sharper in focus). Also, it might strengthen the composition overall if the clouds could be burnt in a little more.
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 3 months ago:
you are right about beyond the fence! Thanks so much for the comments.
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 3 months ago:
I agree with boyd, I like the people in this shot, it adds alot to this photo, I like how you captured the clouds hovering over the mountains
snaps (Dana N) added a critique 3 months ago:
I wonder what the one chap was so animated about! Good feel, would prefer a bit more sharpness.

by warreagle
8 comments
HuubL added a critique 3 months ago:
Agree with Mike! This is a nice classic landscape. The blur was too much.
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 3 months ago:
This is much better! I love this landscape: the slowly fading hills on the background, the old wooden fence, almost colapsing... beautiful. Maybe I would have moved a few steps to the right or turned a bit to the right. imo there have to be more space on the right of the open space between the trees. Zoom out would also help.
Another thing... if you're able to go back here, maybe it would be a nice idea to make a detail photo of the fence or the bunch of wood (I mean the wood visible on the left).
groetjes
Tamara
lotr_n1 (Nathan Hauser) added a critique 3 months ago:
Amazing! Amy I am so proud!
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 3 months ago:
thanks for the input everyone!
boyd added a critique 3 months ago:
Yes, this is much stronger that the manipulated one. I agree with Tamara that this is a great location and, if you have access to return here, I am sure that there are lots of possibilities for very strong images.

by warreagle
6 comments
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 4 months ago:
thanks for the comment...the blurring was edited in, just playing around with some effects. I appreciate the input
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 3 months ago:
I agree with Beamer. I looked at this photo a few days back, didn't know what to think of it and I wanted to know the same thing as Beamer: how did you get the blur? Playing around is fine, don't drop it. To me, Vazaar is giant play ground. Sometimes it works, sometimes not.
Maybe you can make the blur smaller, centered, only on the edges and less striking.
mrsmorunion (Tammy Runion) added a critique 3 months ago:
This is the place to play around and see what works. Maybe try a glamor filter instead of the blurring to just soften the whole photo. I like the shot, did you save the original? I'd like to see that without the blur...
kseniaC (ksenia) added a critique 3 months ago:
i love the composition of this picture!
but like others have said..the blur is a little too obvious
i think with a less amount of blur and more detail it could be an amazing shot!
boyd added a critique 3 months ago:
My "problem" with the shot as posted is that the underlying image is so strong I am wondering what the blurring etc adds to the overall composition. I look and think that it is a bit of a shame to lose the detail of the flowers in the grass and the lichen/moss on the fence. I agree that the effect you are developing can be very powerful and hope that you will keep exploring this approach, but maybe toned down a touch in this case.

by warreagle
6 comments
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 3 months ago:
I thought these might be from the Southeast, they remind me of home in western Virginia. This is very nice, I like the depth and sense of peace. I wish you had included a little more foreground below the bottom of the fence.
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 3 months ago:
It's just what I ment when I gave that another comment on photo #30848. I like this composition more, imo it's more balanced although the colours of the another one are more intense.
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 3 months ago:
thought so Tamara. thanks for the input.
blossompp3 added a critique 3 months ago:
Gorgeous! Makes me want to visit TN!
lotr_n1 (Nathan Hauser) added a critique 3 months ago:
very nice.

by warreagle
2 comments
lolly (lolly smits) said 4 months ago:
I'd really like to see you try this one again; only this time, have a truly sharp pic and go in a little closer. I think the colours and detail would then really stand out and make it a favorite for me! All the best to you, :O)
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 4 months ago:
thanks so much for the comment and idea!

by warreagle
10 comments
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 8 months ago:
Amy,
Another nice from you - well seen and well executed on both sides of the camera. I love the golden hue of this and the effect of the footprints in the sand - it's kind of Biblical, I think!
Best,
Jon
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 8 months ago:
Thanks Jon!
AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) added a critique 8 months ago:
Me gusta la idea pero me estropea la toma el excesivo reflejo en el agua.
Saludos
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 8 months ago:
Gracias, Ana
photoaholic (Geoffrey Reynertz) added a critique 6 months ago:
i love the color and the idea of the shot
it makes me feel on holiday

by warreagle
3 comments
warreagle (Amy Warr) said 6 months ago:
different crop here: www.vazaar.com/topic:green/photos/id:28635/
photoaholic (Geoffrey Reynertz) added a critique 6 months ago:
incredible color, very interesting use of dof
CEG added a critique 6 months ago:
Nice job. Cool DOF. Feels like he's watching us.
the other side of the fence