Uploaded by tjm - 6 comments - Topic: Nature (7 months ago)
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Nature (7 months ago)
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 7 months ago:
shivahuja (shiv ahuja) added a critique 7 months ago:
the swan is placed in a very awkward position in the frame,
i would have have liked it in the lower half of the grid,on the left,with respect to the rule of thirds,thats if i wanted a wide frame,
the other way would be a tight portrait like composition....
tjm said 7 months ago:
Thanks for your comments. I have just discovered the world of taking pictures as a hobby. I learn daily from this site, especially when my photos are looked at. Again, thanks.
koo88 added a critique 7 months ago:
Cropping out some of the excess water may bring the swan closer revealing more details.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
I agree with all of the above comments - I would add that the water is beautiful, however...it would have made a nice capture apart from the swan.
Best,
Jon
warreagle (Amy Warr) added a critique 7 months ago:
I agree with jon on the water, it's great!
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A nice moment, a little weakened by the blown out details in the swan. I also think the framing/cropping is a bit too loose.