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Uploaded by tjm - 5 comments - Topic: Green (8 months ago)  


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ryanopaz (Ryan Opaz) added a critique 7 months ago:

Seems to lack a focal point or any direction. Maybe bring the colors out more or could cause your eye to be drawn in.

Pradeep (Pradeep P) added a critique 7 months ago:

I second Ryan, I feel that there is no focal point. Try working on the contrasts in the image...maybe a greyscale :)

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 7 months ago:

The sweet area of this subject that I would be nice to see "featured" in your composition is the 2 stalks that cross each other on the left of this composition. They have a nice area of focused light on them and a composition that really explored that area of the scene would be much stronger. This is just too busy and, as others have said, lacks focus of interest and it lack sharp focus as well.

sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 7 months ago:

I can only agree what people have said above. It's very disorderly. Try to find out for yourself what you had in mind while you were photographing. Maybe it did look very beautiful for you at the time, but for us it simply doesn't work.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:

There is really nothing to commend this photo, I'm afraid. Be sure to have a purpose for your photograph!

Cheers,
Jon

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