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taikrixel (thomas mueller) said 5 months ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 5 months ago:
I would try a little lens distortion correction. Most architecture shots are more rectilinear. The composition feels unbalanced but not sure what to suggest. The rocks in the lower left don't gain anything, but if you crop you loose the edge of the opening in the wall. Maybe a different camera position a little more to the right?? With no contrast in the upper area, the blurred vignette on the bottom corners just looks like a mistake, imo.
AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) added a critique 5 months ago:
Me gusta el ángulo y el espejo en que se convierte la gran ventana. En la parte técnica estoy de acuerdo con Clyde.
Saludos.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 5 months ago:
I like this - Clyde is correct, I think, in his advice. Nonetheless, this is a strong composition and succeeds despite its minimal shortcomings.
Best,
jon
xLeave (Boris Dozorets) added a critique 5 months ago:
nice light,
but i think it works only in set of photos
BeppeRdam (Giuseppe Moscarda) added a critique 5 months ago:
good capture, the composition leaves me some doubts at the left part... too empty and makes me wonder what's at the right side, maybe something more interesting?
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i'd shoot this for the newspaper last year. the building was part of the open architecture project "architektouren".