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urban art (4 months ago)
boyd added a critique 4 months ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 4 months ago:
With this type of subject (which I like, BTW) you really need to straighten the image carefully. This runs downhill on the right. The graphic nature of this is very strong and pleasing to me. I like the shadow very much. Not sure if this is the best topic for this image, I would also post the straightened version in Shadows and/or Windows.
soreks (Fedor Soreks) said 4 months ago:
boyd, Clyde: Sorry, guys, this all looks exactly "as built": look at the lower and the right edges of the windows: the former is horizontal and the latter is vertical. So this hardly is a good fit for Windows but is a perfect sample of urban art, sort of :).
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 4 months ago:
Huh???
soreks (Fedor Soreks) said 4 months ago:
As built, come to Kyiv to see it :)
360Pixels (Ayash Basu) added a critique 4 months ago:
Does feel tilting to the right a bit. I think your heading is fine and suits the subject otherwise.
soreks (Fedor Soreks) said 4 months ago:
Yep, I've always felt that it takes at least some artistry to draw such lines in concrete :).
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I like the colours and find the shadow and window pattern quite interesting and that the off-set composition works well with the subject. On the negative side, I find that the dominant line at the top not being horizontal quite distracting.