Uploaded by snaps - 5 comments - Topic: Portrait of a Person (2 months ago)
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Portrait of a Person (2 months ago)
aloha_photo (Jeff Sisemoore) added a critique 2 months ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 2 months ago:
Yes, nice framing. The disappointing part is the softness of the hair that is over her face. A wider aperture and a faster shutter speed would help a lot with that and it would also put the background more into the blur of the tighter DoF. This would help to separate her more from the trees.
boyd added a critique 2 months ago:
I also think that the composition and energy you have captured with this shot are very strong. I agree with Clyde that a faster shutter speed might have made it even stronger.
snaps (Dana N) said 2 months ago:
Thanks for the feedback. Currently it's the shutter settings I'm having the most trouble mastering!
TerynYancey (Teryn Yancey) added a critique 2 months ago:
I agree with the softness on her face being dissapointing... I do love that she is off center
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I think this is well done. I particularly like the off-center composition because the way she is turning allows her hair to lead your eye back into the frame.