This one holds more interest, but suffers from a need for straightening. This angle is not oblique enough to hold impact of to add to the shot, so either more angle or straight.

Composicion encantadora, sombras y reflejos agradables, el unico detalle que me distrae es el horizonte inclinado. Saludos.

I agree with beamer here, the horizon needs to be more straight or more angled. Also if the kid stands out more as a silhouette, it would be a lovely shot considering the beautiful shadow you got there...

Thanks so much for the comments. I did play around with straightening the horizon at first but kept coming back to the angled version. I liked the various vertical lines throughout the photo. Thanks for the suggestions.

... meant diagonal, not vertical...

I also think that the horizon is distracting. Given where it is in the frame and you tried straightening it, did you try getting rid of it altogether? Doing this on screen seems to allow my eye to immediately focus only on the boy (?) and that fabulous shadow.

I just used the scroll bar cropper & agree, it's much better getting rid if the horizon. Thanks so much.

Yes great shot would have to agree with cropping of the horizon!! Keep the shutter clicken !!

Andy