Uploaded by sfkp - 6 comments - Topics: Long Exposure (2 months ago) Urban life (2 months ago) Trains (2 months ago)
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Long Exposure (2 months ago) Urban life (2 months ago) Trains (2 months ago)
JeffCleveland (Jeff Cleveland) added a critique 2 months ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 2 months ago:
Nice take on a common subject. The black sky and the stripes of the side of the train create a nice graphic feel to the whole thing.
lightningPaul (Paul) added a critique 2 months ago:
Nice, especially the lines of the train, the floor and the lights on the left. The part at the right is a bit disturbing, perhaps crop this away. Also there is not really a main point of interest, in other words: there is too much in this image (train, 3 walking people in the middle, another group of walking people more at the right and the part at the right).
sfkp (Tamara) said 2 months ago:
@ Paul: Actually, those three people you describe, is actually one: becouse of the long exposure you can see the person's movement. I agree about cropping on the right, so that the cabin is not visible and maybe crop from above... maybe it's more balanced like that. Those are things you see later, if you've looked several times to the image.
Thank you all for your comments.
ApurvaMadia (Apurva Madia) added a critique 2 months ago:
Sheer delight seeing this photo. Great job, congratulations.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 2 months ago:
Excellent work on this one - one of your best!
Cheers,
Jon
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The horizontal lines draw your eye to the person facing the camera in a very interest way. Not sure I would have noticed them otherwise. I also really like the three people in the middle. An intriguing photo. Nice shot.