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Everyday Artifacts (5 months ago) Straight from Cam (5 months ago)
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Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 4 months ago:
soreks (Fedor Soreks) added a critique 4 months ago:
I'd second Clyde's suggestion on square crop: tighter on the right, to the corner of the white square the shoes toes are in.
sfkp (Tamara) said 4 months ago:
Beamer and Soreks: you're right. I made a square crop and it worked out better. Only one problem: when I made this a year ago, I made it 640 X 480 pixels. :s (why???!!! I moved now and don't have that black and white floor anymore)
So, I made a border around it otherwise Vazaar wasn't able to add the new version.
www.vazaar.com/topic:everyday-artifacts/photos/id:...
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 4 months ago:
Wow, this is great for a straight from the cam - nothing to suggest - nice work!
Cheers,
Jon
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There is a nice diagonal flow created by the camera angle, the placement of the shoes and the light streak. I would recommend cropping this to a square, it would accentuate the character of the subject because of the square grid on the floor and it would help to eliminate the distracting bits of the white tiles showing along the left edge of frame.
Nicely seen, nicely captured.