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Uploaded by sebrundage - 4 comments - Topic: Best Macro (9 months ago)

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Best Macro (9 months ago)

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jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Stephen,

Another winner, in my opinion. I like your work. The lighting isn't wonderful, but it's good - it's a little flat. The composition is strong, although the dof leaves a little to be desired. Having said all that - I like it.

Best,
Jon

jodosh (Johnny Haddock) added a critique 9 months ago:

I agree with Jon, it is kinda flat, and the hole in the leaf on the right side is a little distracting. good job though.

sebrundage (Stephen B) said 9 months ago:

Thanks for the feedback. I've played with cropping out the tear in the leaf on the right, but it just seems to be worse. I see what you mean by it being flat - perhaps some post processing (this is pretty much the straight jpeg image from the camera.

Jon, I'm curious about your comment on the dof - do you think it would be stronger with the foreground of the leaf in focus more?

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Stephen,

Absolutely!I think it would have significantly strengthened the shot.

Best,
Jon

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