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by sebrundage
4 comments

lasiate added a critique 9 months ago:

une belle perruque pour ce tronc et une netteté irréprochable pour la texture de l'écorce!Amusant

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Love the comp - the light - the texture. Beautiful job!

Best,
Jon

boyd added a critique 9 months ago:

Yes, I agree that this is a very strong composition of an unusal subject. Great colour and texture captured, and I love the ivy creeping out of the bottom left of frame.

DREED added a critique 8 months ago:

Just love the colors....Nice shot!

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by sebrundage
4 comments

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Beautiful colors and nice sweep of light across the photo. Did you soften the upper right in post processing? Just curious. Wonderful work!

Best,
Jon

lasiate added a critique 9 months ago:

belle abstraction dynamique et la couleur est superbe. Dommage le déséquilibre des flous assez irrégulier. Post traitement ?

boyd added a critique 9 months ago:

I also like the abstraction here, with the colour and lines working well in the image. My first reaction was that I would have preferred it to be sharper right across the frame, but on a longer gaze I think that the use of dof works quite effectively.

Pradeep (Pradeep P) added a critique 8 months ago:

This would look good as my wallpaper :)

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by sebrundage
4 comments

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Stephen,

Another winner, in my opinion. I like your work. The lighting isn't wonderful, but it's good - it's a little flat. The composition is strong, although the dof leaves a little to be desired. Having said all that - I like it.

Best,
Jon

jodosh (Johnny Haddock) added a critique 9 months ago:

I agree with Jon, it is kinda flat, and the hole in the leaf on the right side is a little distracting. good job though.

sebrundage (Stephen B) said 9 months ago:

Thanks for the feedback. I've played with cropping out the tear in the leaf on the right, but it just seems to be worse. I see what you mean by it being flat - perhaps some post processing (this is pretty much the straight jpeg image from the camera.

Jon, I'm curious about your comment on the dof - do you think it would be stronger with the foreground of the leaf in focus more?

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Stephen,

Absolutely!I think it would have significantly strengthened the shot.

Best,
Jon

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by sebrundage
1 comment

remirol (Andy Lorimer) said 9 months ago:

great great shot, the shadow of the sun and the moon well done :)

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by sebrundage
4 comments

Sonoma added a critique 9 months ago:

Lovely colr, soft and pleasing to the eye. Could be a touch clearer, but I like it.

boyd added a critique 9 months ago:

I agree with Sonoma that the softness of the colours works very well across the frame. It is a shame that the focus isn't a tad sharper on any particular part to help draw the eye in even more.

aloha_photo (Jeff Sisemoore) added a critique 9 months ago:

I have to say, I agree with Sonoma and boyd. The colors are terrific. A sharper focus would have made this one pop.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Stephen,

Very nice work - love the soft colors and am not bothered that it is a little soft as to the focus. Beautiful capture.

Best,
Jon

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