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Beach
(1 year ago)
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aloha_photo (Jeff Sisemoore) added a critique 1 year ago:
lasiate added a critique 1 year ago:
nice composition for a different beach scene. U have to get some more details from the person.
ikol22 (Fabrizio Zanelli) added a critique 1 year ago:
If you had posted this photo in "solitude" topic, should be perfect. In this one, yes, I agree with previous suggestions: just a bit more detail of the person in shadow. A part that I really love this unconventional view of a beach. It's that one I prefer.
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 year ago:
Agree with all above. The pink, warming tone doesn't appeal to me. I think this would have been much better as a straight B&W. The starker tones would have emphasized the subject and environment.
lolly (lolly smits) added a critique 1 year ago:
The sky is just superb! Great composition and idea. love it.
mizztech (Maria Little) added a critique 1 year ago:
very good compo and toning
tulna (Tulna Chauhan) added a critique 1 year ago:
I agree with the above too - the person needs more emphasis. But the composition is perfect and I quite like the tone here.
Sher (Sher Hilliard) added a critique 1 year ago:
I disagree with the above. The topic is Beach not person. I think the mystery surrounding the person works well. I like it as is. Wonderful work.
cutebutstupid (Amy Baxter) added a critique 1 year ago:
I actually agree with Sher on this one. Although I do wonder what a straight b/w would like. Wonderful idea!
jcniguez (José Carlos Ñíguez) added a critique 1 year ago:
Una fotografía con encanto. El viraje a sepia-rosaceo, un gran acierto. Encuadre, contraste, profundidad de campo y saturación muy buenos; solamente y coincido con Jeff en que se podría haber aclararado la silueta de la figura humana y definirla más. ¡Enhorabuena!
ikol22 (Fabrizio Zanelli) added a critique 1 year ago:
Cool !!! I'm happy it has been featured.
sunside (Markus Mayer) added a critique 3 months ago:
I really don't see much to improve here. One thing could be the shadows. I'd probably light that guy up just a little bit so that a little more detail is visible, but it would be really a fine tweak. I'm not sure what that thing is that hangs there on the third bar, but when I think about it, the photo would lose something if that would have been removed.
Really, that's a great shot!
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I like the composition and sepia treatment a lot. The image is very appealing and not your ordinary beach scene. The one critique I might offer is to urge you to show a bit more detail in the dark areas of the person. I think I am looking at a bearded man wearing a hooded jacket (or perhaps a woman with hair blowing), but he/she is so dark that I can't quite make out the details. I'm left guessing when I would rather be admiring. I would lighten this person a tiny amount. Still, this is a fine image, IMHO.