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Boats (9 months ago)
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:
photoaholic (Geoffrey Reynertz) said 9 months ago:
Jon, thanks for your all comments. I agree with you, it's too centered, this because i had to crop on the left. I didn't notice the palm tree and your right.
best
Geoffrey
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Nice framing - but a little bit static, I think - slightly too centered. The focus is soft as well and it's a little underexposed. I don't like that you have cropped the palm tree on the right. Please note, I have given you props on several of your photographs - you have done lots of very fine work. Don't take my critique as a personal attack - just being honest.
Best,
Jon