I think I would either more or less details of the person.

At first I thought water was splashing off her legs. Now I see it's plants. That distracts me from her beautiful silhouette.

I agree; the plants do distract a bit. I also think that a small dodge on the chest would help; I am a bit bothered by the slight hint of a light color in the suit. I think it would be more pwerful if a bit darker. Great concept.

T

Quizá sea un criterio equivocado el mio, pero no pienso que las ramas u otros elementos naturales tengan que distraer necesariamente la atencion. Es más, en este caso creo que contribuyen, junto con las montañas (sobre todo la de la parte izquierda) y los reflejos, a situar espacialmente al objeto, confiriéndole un toque agradable de proximidad al sujeto. Es solo una opinion. Saludos

I think this image has some real potential. I'm going to have to agree with Nick on the details. I think I'd prefer more or less. In this case, there are some beautiful reflections on that water so it might've been nice to focus on bringing those out and making the girl more of a silhouette. I also find the plants a bit distracting but they're thin and could easily be handled with a few clicks in Photoshop.

You have a very nice composition and silhouette here (especially with the reflections under the legs), but the blacks are too gray for me. For this type of image I prefer darker grays to blacks for the subject.
Thomas

You are really submitting a lot or work lately! This is good, but not as good as it might be - the above comments are very helpful, in my opinion. I love the reflecting light in the foreground - amazing!

Best,
Jon

need better exposure