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Uploaded by paddlepunk - 6 comments - Topic: Trees (1 year ago)  


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Trees (1 year ago)  

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ryanopaz (Ryan Opaz) added a critique 1 year ago:

Water color-ry!I like the almost monochromatic look of this, though I do with there was a point of focus, or stronger directional line somewhere within. Nice feel, but doesn't necessarily draw me through the picture.

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 year ago:

Seems lees about "Trees", maybe better for Skyscapes or Green. Not sure if the overall softness was intentional or not, but if it was then I don't think you quite got the technique right. If not intentional, then it's just not in focus, use a higher aperture. This is a beautiful subject, the sky in very nice.

effraie added a critique 1 year ago:

i agree 2 comments there ^
something else: i'm not completly sure, but i've the feeling the picture is leaning a bit on the right.

TerynYancey (Teryn Yancey) added a critique 1 year ago:

The sky is beautiful... a little soft...I agree that its really not about the trees...

paddlepunk (Holger Neu) said 1 year ago:

@ those who say sth. about the topic: its just that that i didnt find a better one^^

lightholder (Kimberly Lightholder) added a critique 1 year ago:

You know, I seem to miss topics a lot... don't listen to them. ;)

I like this, the colours are beautiful. My only thought is the foreground seems to be competing with what I assume is the focus of the image, the landscape. Not sure what to suggest though. Perhaps burning the sky a bit would add more impact to the top and draw the eye upward? It's a lovely landscape.

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