
by mosesport
7 comments
hampshire added a critique 1 month ago:
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 1 month ago:
such a fun photo!! I can't really add any critique, great job!
mooch added a critique 1 month ago:
I like the projection of a human trait onto an animal. It's cute
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 month ago:
Ugh, cats!! Cute, the pen is a bit distracting, but I guess this wasn't posed...
mikeock (Mike Adams) added a critique 1 month ago:
Wonderful job.
I wouldn't change a thing

by mosesport
6 comments
warreagle (Amy Warr) added a critique 8 months ago:
thanks for the comment on my guitar! I love the expression you've captured here.
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 8 months ago:
Great expression, great capture!! Your highlights are a bit overexposed and blown out. This would have more impact with a more square cropping. The bottom doesn't buy you anything and the eye really wants to focus on her face.
jorgelopez (Jorge López) added a critique 8 months ago:
Great work!!! you had a great model and the moment with the snow is perfect. Her face says a lot of things.
Ludimaginary (Richard Vantielcke) added a critique 7 months ago:
Nice frame, great contrast with the white of th snow/background and the red of the hairs...
I like it.
refocus (andy kämpf) added a critique 7 months ago:
great image.. i like the contrast of the orange colour to the snowy white background. it's really pop out!

by mosesport
2 comments
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
I like nearly everything about your shot and framing - the AC unit doesn't help the shot, but I can see you would have a difficult time removing it! I love the brick behind the house - wouldn't want to give that up...moving to the left a few paces might have worked. Nice work.
Best,
Jon
ryanopaz (Ryan Opaz) added a critique 7 months ago:
I miss not having a bit more the sidewalk in the shot, so that my eye is led further into it. I also think this would be interesting with some desaturation, to play off the rundown nature of it.

by mosesport
4 comments
lasiate added a critique 7 months ago:
le regard est détourné du visage par la trop forte luminosité de l'arrière-plan
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 7 months ago:
Sorry, but I don't agree with lasiate (if my babelfish translater translate correctly ;). The background is blur enough to give attention to her face, but the shirt is to colourful and too busy. Nice reflection in the glasses and I love her facial expression.
MrVertigoo (Tomer Rozenblum) added a critique 7 months ago:
The reflection from the glasses are great. the thing that bothers me in the photo is that her hand is cut out.
ryanopaz (Ryan Opaz) added a critique 7 months ago:
Yeah I would like to see more of the hand, though I love the pose and direction of the gaze.

by mosesport
7 comments
boyd added a critique 8 months ago:
I agree with Amy, the wrinkles are a hit, as are the eyes. You have allowed the focus to be on the face with good use of dof and his grey coat also helps. This is a very engaging portrait, well done.
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 8 months ago:
Looks like a guy I would like to share a warm breakfast with and share stories!! What a nice capture. If you want a minor critique: try B&W, might really pull this into a great place and either way, a bit of work in curves would probably pull out a better tonal range. Maybe a bit of burning in the eyes area.
lasiate added a critique 8 months ago:
beaucoup de joie et de détails dans ce portrait. La dominante rouge est un peu forcée mais il faisait sans doute très froid
mosesport (Moses) said 7 months ago:
Thank you all very much for your kind words. It's very much appreciated.
TheOldMan (Mel Buckpitt) added a critique 7 months ago:
Great portrait shot. You have captured this guys character.

by mosesport
1 comment
tengtan (Teng Tan) said 7 months ago:
I love the textured, graphic quality of this photo. The limited palette produced by the processing puts the final touch to the vintage effect.

by mosesport
4 comments
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 8 months ago:
Technically this is a "high angle" shot of a foot not a "low angle" shot. Low angle shots have the camera lower than the subject and shooting up. In cinematography, a low angle shot of a person is usually where the camera is at or lower than knee level and the camera axis is either horizontal of slightly up.
But, anyway, this photo feels a bit "snapshot". Not a whole lot of impact/interest. I would like to have seen the camera a bit to the left so as to get the skateboard out from behind the leg.
The shoe is so cool, maybe a true low angle shot that really pulls the interest/eye to the shoe.
MrVertigoo (Tomer Rozenblum) added a critique 8 months ago:
I have to agree, that is a High angle shot.
other than that it's a very nice one. i would crop the hand out as well.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
The hand is a major distraction for me - otherwise, a very cool shot.
Best,
Jon
warreagle (Amy Warr) added a critique 7 months ago:
I'm with Beamer, go for the shoe. I like the idea of the whole shot too. Just needs a little tweaking.

by mosesport
6 comments
ambrosiastar (Ambrosia) added a critique 1 year ago:
Definitely has that left behind feeling to it.
effraie added a critique 1 year ago:
well, i'm sorry, i just realize i did write left for right...
s/left/right in my first comment :)
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 year ago:
A slightly diff framing would make a difference. The white block thing in the upper left distracts my eye. This bic is going nowhere, but it wants to... so maybe open up the right of the frame a little to give it room to move...
MMeye added a critique 1 year ago:
Ok for the position of the bike, would have been better with space on the left.
Anyway, what a beautiful treatment, wow...
LeStro added a critique 8 months ago:
I like that there is no space on the right... it makes me wonder what is hidden there, maybe even "what's next for this bike, who is going to ride it?"
I also really like your B&W conversion work.
And... thanks for your comment on my photo.

by mosesport
2 comments

by mosesport
16 comments
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mysight (Carl H. Sr.) added a critique 1 year ago:
Moses,did you google that song lyric?
mosesport (Moses) said 1 year ago:
Yeah, it didn't bring anything up. Hmmm
erinelizzybeth (Erin) added a critique 1 year ago:
Great picture...i love it!
Syam added a critique 1 year ago:
Cool stuff!
Udower (Udo Weier) added a critique 1 year ago:
A very good idea. Very nice!
So awesome...if I had to make a critique I'd crop the pen out at the top. Love it though!