
by moktoipas
5 comments
guffy (Stefan Karlstrom) added a critique 1 year ago:
kyla (Kyla) added a critique 1 year ago:
Unfortunately the plane nor the setting sun does not do enough to captivate. It needs more punch. There is too much blue space and the clouds are too wispy. Although I am a fan of minimalism I don't find this fits into that category either.
cheguillaume (Pierre-Yves cheguillaume) added a critique 1 year ago:
I agree with kyla maybe it could fit in minimalism. But it's my personal point of view.
Effectivement, il est probable que cela soit plus du ressort du minimalisme que du topic skyscape. C'est un point de vue personnel.
Pi-Production (Eric Rousset) added a critique 1 year ago:
Un peu trop commun à mon goût ;)
Marco (Marc-Antoine VACHON) added a critique 1 year ago:
Too much blue sky and not enough clouds for me.
Nothing really interresting in this picture.

by moktoipas
1 comment
jangetagrip (jan) said 1 year ago:
oh i like this, the movement in the smoke is great! very good work!

by moktoipas
3 comments
Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 1 year ago:
The bright spot where the sun is hurts.
AntoineB (Antoine BARBOT) added a critique 1 year ago:
too much sky in my advice
gregcsmith (Greg Smith) added a critique 1 year ago:
I agree, crop a few cms off the top.
A little bit too plain. Looks like an average sky.