Uploaded by lotr_n1 - 6 comments - Topic: Bicycles (6 months ago)
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narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 6 months ago:
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 6 months ago:
Think more about your composition. Why this view - this angle? Could your comp have been stronger - how? What is the point of this particular crop? Are there distracting elements that take us out the subject? What is the point you are making with this photograph? Should you have shot it from a lower angle perhaps? Should there be more separation between the subject and the background? I could answer these questions for you, but as a young photographer, you should go through this process many, many times with each of your shots. This shot is okay, but could have been much better. I hope you don't mind me sharing in this way. I only desire to help.
Sincerely,
Jon
kalepsiash added a critique 6 months ago:
i like it... not sure what i like about it but i like it... maybe its the way the blue in the bike stands out against the dingy brick!
i dont really like how you can see the corner on the lower right side... distracting to me
but i like it!
where was this at peru?
TerynYancey (Teryn Yancey) added a critique 6 months ago:
seems like something is missing...
warreagle (Amy Warr) added a critique 6 months ago:
the out of focus handlebar in the foreground bothers me but I like the colors and textures.
Kenergy added a critique 6 months ago:
I feel as though I'm about to jump on the bike and go for ride...
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I love the feeling of this photo, the contrast in the colors are perfect, with the dark brown of the bricks against the blue of the bicycle. I aslo like the framing of this photo as well! Overall great job!!