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Uploaded by lightholder - 6 comments - Topics: Orange (1 year ago)   A Shot with a Story (1 year ago)  


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Pixim (Eric) added a critique 1 year ago:

Je la choisis pour l'histoire. Cette photo me parle, et me permet d'imaginer un contexte. Le traitement poussé noirci (pour moi) trop le bouquet de fleur, et ce malgré une lumière bien gérée. Concernant la composition, l'objet à la gauche de l'image est superflu, et même dérangeant. Belle image et bravo, à ces détails. A la prochaine.

I choose it for the history. This photograph speaks to me, and allows me to imagine a context. Thorough treatment blackened (for me) too the bunch of flowers, and this in spite of a well managed light. Concerning the composition, the object with the left of the image is superfluous, and even disturbing. Beautiful image, except for these details. With the next one. With the next one.

sunside (Markus Mayer) added a critique 1 year ago:

Maybe a glass of wine instead of a beer and the candle a bit more to the right so that it doesn't blend with the background - but maybe that would strip the authentic character off the image. The purple tones in the upper right could be a bit darker but that's it. I like that one!

marcouet52 (Mario Arcouette) added a critique 1 year ago:

I must agree this is a shoot with a story,
candleligth should be less than an inch to the rigth,
to put it as a 1/3 element,wouldnt remove any element
example replacing the beer with white wine would not bring the same yellow reflection on the table that complement the flower, removing the left subject would empty this story of 2 communicating.
overall my comment is 4.7/5.
Even the darkness on the bouquet help the flowers
but the upper rigth need to be corrected.
Thanks for that great shoot

dcannaday added a critique 1 year ago:

What a beautiful photo. To me tells a story of a long, crazy, tiring, joyful, and ultimatley beautiful day..

PhotoDaniels (Stephanie Daniels) added a critique 1 year ago:

I wouldn't change anything with this photo! I love the composition and the beer! It really tells an excellent story! Those flowers are gorgeous!

The processing here is excellent! Maybe a little dark but it helps the storyline! :)

LadyWings (Kara Brothers) added a critique 1 year ago:

I like the composition and DOF here.

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