Uploaded by lightholder - 7 comments - Topic: Three (1 year ago)
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Lindy (Lindy G) added a critique 1 year ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 year ago:
Agree with Lidy, good capture, good processing.
Jordan (Jordan Young) added a critique 1 year ago:
Very nice green color on their clothes. I think there may be a tad too much vignette on the shot though, kinda distracts me.
Good work though.
lightholder (Kimberly Lightholder) said 1 year ago:
Thank you! Yeah, I struggled a bit with the vignetting as I liked it both with it, and without it. I had a vision in my head that this photo was telling me it could really be something beautiful, like a glimpse at a memory, so I added the vignetting, then rethought it, but for some odd reason, when I decreased it, i felt like the photo didn't have the same kind of enclosure to it.
It is quite probable that my vision for the final piece was not appropriate for the shot, I'm still exploring new processes. Wow, I really need to post more, this is still my only photograph. =)
mysight (Carl H. Sr.) added a critique 1 year ago:
Three beautiful bride's-maids?
What a great background for those dresses.
The contrast between the smooth and dressy ladies,
and the rough and weathered wall,is very nice.
I agree that it is a little too dark around the edges.
mizztech (Maria Little) added a critique 1 year ago:
nice textures and lightning.. love the green!!
the only thing is the vignetting, I would used les vignetting on the woman on the left..
part from that very good image..
Leilani added a critique 1 year ago:
I like their expressions and the moment and colors. I think the composition mightve worked better had the girl on the far right didnt have her arm cut out but its not a big problem as your eyes go straight to their faces. I think theres too much vignetting, it is good to help a flat image or to fill in empty boring space but when it goes so far into the image that it overlaps your subject you lose detail and volume within its shadows.
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love the light in this photo.. and the texture ,especially considering they are dressed up,I also like that they are not posed.. as in it is very natural..