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Uploaded by jorgelopez - 7 comments - Topic: Street photography (9 months ago)  


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boyd added a critique 9 months ago:

Nice location with good colours, shadows and an interesting tractor parked on the street! There are some parts of the frame that seem quite sharp, and others (like the window above the man's head) that is not as sharp as I would like. Also, there might be room to crop a little off the bottom (at about the line of the long shadow from the left) to help focus on the action.

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 9 months ago:

I would have walked up on the scene a little to try to engage the man more in the image. This just feels cluttered and non-focused, the eye just wanders about...

lasiate added a critique 9 months ago:

les bleus qui se répétent sont intéressants mais l'homme disparait dans l'ombre et l'on ne sait plus quel est le but de cette photo

jorgelopez (Jorge López) said 9 months ago:

Thank you very much for the comments guys. I think you´re right and I´m going to make changes and look what I see. Thank you again.
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jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Jorge,

Clyde is exactly right - what were you trying to say here? Think about the point of each shot.

Best,
Jon

Mardynn (Martin Tomaszczyk) added a critique 9 months ago:

I think this image could have been cropped a little better. Other than that I think its great.

Hanssie (Hans Stellingwerf) added a critique 7 months ago:

Nice scene and details but indeed, the man and the tractor could have some more space between...

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