
by jorgelopez
8 comments
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 3 months ago:
AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) added a critique 3 months ago:
La iluminación mayor del techo estorba un poquito...
anemix (John Anderson) added a critique 3 months ago:
this is a great capture. I'd probably run the contrast up a bit to make the strings disappear and then try going high key on the levels adjustment to see what that affected. This is a picture that could be diced into parts for interesting results. If it were possible I'd have shifted the composition a bit to the right to eliminate the ceiling light
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 3 months ago:
Very magical and wonderful shot - thanks for sharing!
Best to you,
Jon
360Pixels (Ayash Basu) added a critique 2 months ago:
Very creative, I like it a lot. Thanks.

by jorgelopez
6 comments
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
Interesting attempt, but the light in the upper right really distracts from the main subject.
Best,
Jon
dineshpatel added a critique 7 months ago:
can't undetstand
jorgelopez (Jorge López) said 7 months ago:
May be says a lot of things of a friend that you don´t know and is impossible to know, just knowing him. For me this photo is the portrait of a friend who is always moving, travelling and looking for new things everyday. Like me he´s from Spain but he´ve been living in some countries and travelling to a lot. This is the principal reason, but I´ve more. Like the sun in the back with real light, this means my levels of friendship with him, the higher. At the end, yes, it`s a photo without preparation, technically bad, but for me with a good end and meanings, really personal, I want to say personal things about a great friend and may be nobody understand. That´s it.
May be this is the problem, too personal. I´d try to post more understanding photos.
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antonio (antonio) added a critique 7 months ago:
i like the story behind the picture, and thats a very important part of photography, tell stories, not just trying to make a "pretty picture". i think it wouldve been better in black and white, maybe. but again i think is an interesting picture. well done!
lotr_n1 (Nathan Hauser) added a critique 5 months ago:
I actually really like this photograph. I feel your eyes are drawn directly to the eyes of the person. well done.

by jorgelopez
6 comments
guczo (Attila Balogh) added a critique 5 months ago:
I'm not sure what you're trying to tell me with his.
breaves (Brennan Greaves) added a critique 5 months ago:
There really is no focal point.
photoflood (Kjetil M. Bergem) added a critique 5 months ago:
I am also confused by this one. It is difficult to see what it is and my eyes don't know where to look, so I don't really know what to say.
Maybe you should have chosen to get a more wideangel shot. Or maybe just go closer and find some details. At least have something to focus on.
ErikUnger (Erik Unger) added a critique 5 months ago:
I concur. Without looking at what topic this was under, I really have no idea what it was I was looking at.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 5 months ago:
You have some beautiful light, however!
Best,
Jon

by jorgelopez
3 comments
hampshire added a critique 5 months ago:
Ooooh...cool!
redcat77 (Agnes Milosz) added a critique 5 months ago:
Great shot, clouds are really interesting here, I like that you can't see any noise on the black sky, was it a night shot or just a very good polariser?
The only comment I have is that sun (or moon) is stealing my attention and it bothers me a bit that it is so centered, but it just me. Good job!
jorgelopez (Jorge López) said 5 months ago:
I took it during the day, at 16:00 more or less. I was in Zaragoza, Spain, a place where the skies are amazing. I didn,t use any filter. I just change a little bit levels and contrast in photoshop to put it in the point I think it´s better. Thank you very much.

by jorgelopez
7 comments
lasiate added a critique 7 months ago:
les bleus qui se répétent sont intéressants mais l'homme disparait dans l'ombre et l'on ne sait plus quel est le but de cette photo
jorgelopez (Jorge López) said 7 months ago:
Thank you very much for the comments guys. I think you´re right and I´m going to make changes and look what I see. Thank you again.
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jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
Jorge,
Clyde is exactly right - what were you trying to say here? Think about the point of each shot.
Best,
Jon
Mardynn (Martin Tomaszczyk) added a critique 7 months ago:
I think this image could have been cropped a little better. Other than that I think its great.
Hanssie (Hans Stellingwerf) added a critique 5 months ago:
Nice scene and details but indeed, the man and the tractor could have some more space between...

by jorgelopez
1 comment
Hanssie (Hans Stellingwerf) said 5 months ago:
I saw your comment on my boat and you've mentioned, that there was no interesting thing. Now I'm looking for the interesting thing here..... And I really cannot find it.....

by jorgelopez
4 comments
koo88 added a critique 6 months ago:
Great shadows. I also love the clouds and the beams of light from the sun, There are a few things I would clone out. there is a red circle in between the clouds and something green in the cloud on the left. Besides that, it is a nice capture.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 6 months ago:
I agree with the above comment - this is a beautiful capture, but the red circle and the green something are definitely distracting.
Best,
Jon
ryanopaz (Ryan Opaz) added a critique 6 months ago:
Ditto the red and green. THough to add I would say that the big clouds need a bit more definition so as not to weigh themselves down. Great job though with the sun.
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 6 months ago:
The red and green are from a very understandable and expected lens flare. Almost impossible to avoid when shooting right into the sun. The temptation is to paint these out, but I don't recommend that. I like this one. This might have been a good opportunity to do split toning or possibly even HDR. Did you bracket this at all?

by jorgelopez
4 comments
tjm said 6 months ago:
I loved the contrasts in color and clarity. I could almost smell this flower. Good photo
misu (Mikhail Palinchak) added a critique 6 months ago:
Nice subject. But I think the main problem with colors.
Pradeep (Pradeep P) added a critique 6 months ago:
Lovely details and nice contrasts. IMO the flower is kind-off lost in such a busy background.
AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) added a critique 6 months ago:
Creo que un fondo no tan coloreado habría sido mejor.....
Saludos

by jorgelopez
2 comments
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 6 months ago:
I like the sillouets of the people...good photo!
boyd added a critique 6 months ago:
I also like the silhouettes in this shot. I maybe would have liked a little more details revealed in the shadows to show what the person on the right is actually doing, or perhaps change the point of view slightly to reveal more ... but it is still a good shot.

by jorgelopez
6 comments
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
Jorge,
mmm, yes! Very nice shot - as is...
Best,
Jon
remirol (Andy Lorimer) added a critique 7 months ago:
Jorge
mmm yes, I agree with Jon great the way it is:)
Andy
boyd added a critique 7 months ago:
I also like the light you have captured with this shot. I know what you mean Jorge, it is almost as if you could take it again you might consider taking it from a lower point of view and trying to capture a touch more of the interesting detail at the bottom of the frame. Silhouette of the trees is very nice as is.
mikeock (Mike Adams) added a critique 7 months ago:
Very cool shot.
I agree, if you re-shoot this, i would try a lower angle.
Other than that i think you have done very well with this shot!
gazdi (Csaba Bobák) added a critique 7 months ago:
Couldn't agree more with you, Jorge - I really like it, but something is missing. I'd try a narrow aperture to get those star-shaped lights. That would even make the viewer think there's more detail (and that would also good to achieve somehow, even with the same aperture). I'd also try to lighten the light parts on the sky, making them more tear-like. And try to get rid of those lights on the posts and that red one on the very left.
I must repeat: I like it and I'd love to see a retake/remake.
I like this one, sorta surreal!! For an alternate, more abstract framing try cropping off the left and bottom so the lower left corner is just in the negative space beyond the red ball. I did the "scroll bar crop" and liked it there. See what you think??