I like the lighting and the expression. Nice capture. Again the signature takes away from the photo. I really like this shot though.

Wow! This is a lovely candid scene. The light source and it's cast of light is nice; it really draws the viewer in to looking closer at all the illuminated features. Well done.

I agree with byutanner, ditch the signature line. Across the board, it's distracting and draws the eye away from the image.

Again Andrew...a wonderful photo...but my eye is again caught by the signature. Possibly a border or frame with the signature if you feel you need one. The subject is great - as Jason said the lighting and expression are wonderful. On this site, signature lines aren't needed - I hope you will consider that in the future as I find your photos to be wonderful and detracted only by your signature lines.

Ditto with the signature line. Once I covered it up I was able to make a whole story in these kids expressions (the girl is pissed that the kid in the foreground just cheated her on the price of goldfish. the kid in the bottom left is scared that his fat friend is going to say something stupid and get in a fight with her.) The girl in the Mickey Mouse shirt looks so grown up standing that way. Must have been one great street fair!