This is a difficult picture because I'm not really sure what I'm looking at. You have to look very carefully to see this was taken out a window. I can make out the window information faintly on the right side in the middle above the black line.

What are we looking at? Is it a wall with holes painted on it, or a wall with holes? If it's the latter, what type of building is this? There is not enough information to make a strong image, or to engage the viewer.

Visually all the elements are too strong and chop the image into pieces. There is no real focal point. A stronger image could have been made by composing to include just the middle of the window (the black line) and down. Or perhaps even just cropping out the lights at the top would have made a stronger image.

Thanks for your comments.
It's looking out of a normal window at 'porthole' windows at an art gallery.
I was using the line in the middle to make a 'reflection' below the line.

i like the composition - it is unique and i like to look at this as more of an abstract...

The picture of the wall is really nice, but the black line (which I guess is part of the window frame) really distracts. The repetition of the "windows" and the lamps with different sizes is really interesting and the shadows in the windows are beautiful.

GREAT compo
GREAT catch
LOVE IT

I think this is a very well seen photo - would probably fit better into the abstract topic, but a great capture no matter where you put it.

Best,
Jon