Uploaded by daldao - 6 comments - Topic: Park Bench (11 months ago)
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Park Bench (11 months ago)
pageextent (matt mangan) added a critique 11 months ago:
mizztech (Maria Little) added a critique 11 months ago:
beautifull, alltought I miss some sharpness!!
daldao said 11 months ago:
I miss too, but it was so dark and i didn´t have my tripod. :)
CouCou33 (Ingrid) added a critique 11 months ago:
same comment: miss some sharpness. also I might have liked it better if the sharp area was at the very bottom (begining) of the picture... cause blur before and after is a little confusing to the eye.
but I really like the abstract feeling of this picture :)
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 11 months ago:
Ingrid read my mind, ditto everything she said. If you take what you have here, crop to a square by loosing a little off the bottom, about 2/3 of the out of focus area and crop the top to just loose the bright lights, you will have a very nice composition and the abstract nature of this will be greatly enhanced!! Try it and if you like it, re-post, either here or in "Abstract objects", must MHO.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 10 months ago:
Hi,
Great shot, but it would be better if something were in focus! Thanks for posting.
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Beautiful simplicity. This really works well as a b&w. Nicely done.
matt