Hello daldao, in all the cases, your subject is interesting. For me, I am obstructed by the over-exposure of the panels on the door. I think that behind the squares that could have been good. Concerning framing, I would have tried in the axis of the door with a little withdrawal (if that is possible…) I miss a little clearness for better emphasizing the matter. Many criticisms, it is often easier to say than to make… Greetings.

Actually i upload the wrong picture. This one was a test. In the other hand, original also has the panels of the door a little bit over exposed.
Thanks for your comment, i learned a lot.

I love the dirtiness. Im a fan of this one. I do almost wish it were a little off center though. A different angle may add even more interest!

I agree with Sarah - it's very gritty and pretty at the same time. I also think Eric is right about the overexposed doors. All in all, however, - a fine shot.

Best,
jon

beautifull, alltought I miss some sharpness!!

I miss too, but it was so dark and i didn´t have my tripod. :)

same comment: miss some sharpness. also I might have liked it better if the sharp area was at the very bottom (begining) of the picture... cause blur before and after is a little confusing to the eye.
but I really like the abstract feeling of this picture :)

Ingrid read my mind, ditto everything she said. If you take what you have here, crop to a square by loosing a little off the bottom, about 2/3 of the out of focus area and crop the top to just loose the bright lights, you will have a very nice composition and the abstract nature of this will be greatly enhanced!! Try it and if you like it, re-post, either here or in "Abstract objects", must MHO.

Hi,

Great shot, but it would be better if something were in focus! Thanks for posting.

I guess I agree with the translated version of Ana's comments. The blue is gorgeous. The tilt doesn't bother me, what does is the tip of the top blade being just cut off. Do you have more of this, if so, you should re-crop to give a bit of breathing room above the tip of the blade.

The color is great. I feel something more should be in photo. I just feel something is missing. Maybe a different angle.

I think this is perfect for an advertisement for wind power/alternative energy sources etc.

Si el aspa de arriba se viera completa la foto sería perfecta.

You can almost see the blades flexing, the white of them is very prominent with high saturation, I likes!!

Its simple but I like it. I like the fog and how you cant see where the road leads. Nice.

Me gustan mucho estas perspectivas de carreteras a ras de sueño.
La composición te conduce por la foto
Bien hecho!

What an interesting perspective and composition. I only wish the bottom 10% of the frame was in focus.

I like a lot.
The only thing I can criticize is the horizon (not horizontal).

I agree, it's simple, but I like it too.

you are right.
Thanks

Excellent picture, I love the colours against the dreamy white background!

matt

I am a huge fan of everyday items being shot as celebrities. This is a beautiful photo.That small shadow at the end of the cup is my favorite.

it's a cup? I totally did not get that. Sealux is such a spoiler! :) The blue ridgey area is my favorite

it´s a cup :)

I really like the coloration. The movement of the dumpster makes it almost unrecognizable. I almost wish that this photo wasn't so neatly framed by the 3 surrounding palm trees

Very nice urban shot.
I really like the blur on the dumpster.
Very unique framing.

Me gista mucho el movimiento del cubo de basura sacudido por el camión. Los colores y la composición también me gusta.
De algo tan poco atractivo como un camión de basura funcionando en plena noche has sacado buen provecho.

Saludos

Lo cierto es que jessa tiene razon. a mi tp me gusta mucho que este encerrada entre las tres palmeras. Pero no os pasa que las que os parecen buenas fotos siempre son las mas complicadaas de capturar?
Salu2

Nice balance of colour with the green on the edges and middle. Makes an average subject very warm and intriguing.

matt

Daldao,

I read your comments about my carousel horse and selective saturation. I like the idea, but I do not know how to do that. Can you possibly explain how?

KOO88

You have to use photoshop.my english is not so good. So i can´t explain you, but you can search a tutorial in google.
I learn with a tutorial and a couple of hours.
Sorry

I really like the contrast. The bottom of the pillars are a little soft, but like Boyd said, the composition is so strong, it's really not distracting to the overall photo. Nice work!!

The shot is taken in a summer mornign with a lot of lights and shadows. Because of that the contrast are very high.
It takes me a lot of time to find the right exposure.
Thanks for your critiques. I learn a lot of my owm photo ;)

La foto ha quedado un poco oscura al fondo pero la simetria de las columnas me gusta.

Saludos.

tienes razon saatchi. Tenia que dejar algunas zonas subexpuestas porque si no corria el riesgo de quemar todos los claros. jeje
Es complicado :)

El juego de luces y sobras dirige la vista sobre la fotografía. Lo malo es que al finaldel camino lo que encontramos es ese trozo de pared sobreexpuesto, liso, sin detalle, sin nada que merezca el hermoso recorrido que hemos hecho por las diferentes columnas.
En cualquier caso, el protagonista debe de ser el juego de luces y sombras creado por las columnas. Lo bueno, es que la piedra de éstas tiene textura, lo que da cirto volumen a la foto.
Es decir, que me gusta, que me parece una buena idea, bien resuelta para todo el sol que estaba cayendo.

Saludos