This portrait is beautiful, the colour of the sky is stunning and compliments the hair and peak of a red shirt.

If I were to say anything, I'd suggest not including the repeat of the face as I find it detracts from the clean style of the rest of the photo. If you want to include it, maybe blur it out a bit more and make it a repeat of whole person so it has the impression of a in-camera effect? To be completely honest, it just looks like bad photoshop... I'm so sorry... =) The photo is beautiful on it's own.

Additionally, maybe crop out a bit of the top sky so her eye rests on the third? Might balance the composition a bit more, but maybe not, just a thought.

ok, as we say here in Spain, kitchen listened! =), thanks for the critique, and I'm going to apply what you say, maybe you're so right but I needed someone to give his/her opinion about the "second face", thanks again.

Ditto, above, plus: If she moved her left hand up just an inch, we would see more of it and it would close off the blue space between her hand and chin, which is a little distracting for me..

Personally, I like the repeat of the face.. Not something you see very often. I really like it.

Personnaly i dont think it apply to the theme,
unless we want to see another theme "the spirit within us".
Otherwise the portrait would have been very nice by itself.
But dont loose that idea it could bring more approach
Thanks

thanks marcouet52