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mysight (Carl H. Sr.) added a critique 1 year ago:

Looks like the morning after.
Hope she doesn't break your heart.
At first the words looked in the way
of the photo,but seeing them say "Thinking of You"
really does add something to the story here.
The focus seems slightly off,
but I would treasure a shot like this regardless.

chromadreams (David) said 1 year ago:

Thanks a lot for the comment, the focus is meaningful, I'd tried to create a kind of miss atmosphere.
Thanks again

mysight (Carl H. Sr.) added a critique 1 year ago:

You are very welcome.
Thank you for sharing this piece of your life.

ronjones (Ron Jones) added a critique 1 year ago:

Very creatively done.

andygibb (Andy Gibb) added a critique 1 year ago:

love the addition of the text, the lighting and an expression on the model that says soooo much each time you look at it

joka (Johannes Kapp) added a critique 1 year ago:

impressive!

GinaMoe (Virginia Byers) added a critique 1 year ago:

I like the text but wish you had pushed it further and instead of applying it directley on top I keep seeing it working better blended. You can distort and move the text layer in photoshop.
I don't feel like the model "owns" the text.

Raza (Raza Akhtar) added a critique 1 year ago:

Just great. I do agree with Gina though you should tr playing with the text and also the background. If the background was a little darker the subject would stand out more. But this is great as is.

chromadreams (David) said 1 year ago:

thanks joka.

Virginia and Raza; thank you for you comment, but I wanted the text over the model, I wanted to creat the sensation of thoughts floating in the air, so the text must be over and around the model, that's what I think.
But I apreciate so much your opinion, thnaks again.

chefron (Ron Ernst) added a critique 1 year ago:

It should be cropped lower.

mysight (Carl H. Sr.) added a critique 1 year ago:

I forgot to say,
softly sensual.

chromadreams (David) said 1 year ago:

chefron, maybe I agree with you but..., tell it to my wife, ;-)))))). thanks Ron.

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