
by trancho
19 comments
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guffy (Stefan Karlstrom) added a critique 1 year ago:
kazik (Kazimierz Salwa) added a critique 1 year ago:
It is really catching eye photo. Brilliant DOF. I will also turn it 90 degrees.
Dream (Toni) added a critique 1 year ago:
great fractal!
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:
Wow! Instant fave - amazing capture.
Best and thanks for sharing,
Jon
GarrettHall (Garrett Hall) added a critique 4 months ago:
Love it

by eggplant
5 comments
jaredwolf (Jared Wolf) added a critique 1 year ago:
My gut reaction to this photo was very positive. I get a feeling of being "stuck" inside, longing for the outside. Upon looking a little longer, I'm wondering about how reversing the focus to the outside scene would change the overall feeling...but I'm not sure it would be for the better...
uncommondepth (Roberta Murray) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like the dof and choice of focus here. My complaint is that the image is a bit dark, and the lettering on the window sort of gets lost in the surrounding tones. I'm not really sure how you could have prevented that though. Perhaps using a slightly lower angle?
charmarie (Char) added a critique 1 year ago:
Definately the image could be lighter and the lettering my eye seems to get stuck on.
TheAntipodes (Menno van Zaanen) added a critique 1 year ago:
The low key of this image is nice, but it doesn't make the letters stand out. I personally do like the focus on the letters, which makes a nice distinction between inside and outside.
GarrettHall (Garrett Hall) added a critique 4 months ago:
Lighten up the dark end of the image. My eyes got stuck trying to read the sign because the detail was lost in the dark.

by 360Pixels
7 comments
gregcsmith (Greg Smith) added a critique 1 year ago:
You don't need to change a thing. An excellent shot. Bold colour, crisp feeling and great DOF.
Sher (Sher Hilliard) added a critique 1 year ago:
I agree, excellent photo. I wouldn't change anything.
janiskir added a critique 1 year ago:
Lush and real tactile feeling of wetness
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:
Incredible shot - love the colors, dof, and is this thing sharp or what - amazing.
Cheers,
Jon
misu (Mikhail Palinchak) added a critique 6 months ago:
Green :)

by shivahuja
7 comments
notter71 (Tom Notter) added a critique 1 year ago:
nice color.
not really sure what i'm looking at.
kadenajack (Jack) added a critique 1 year ago:
I wasn't sure what I was looking at at first either. I don't know if that was your intention though, so that may be a good thing. However, since you've asked for comment on this image, I think maybe you are troubled by it in some way. So, perhaps a little less shallow depth of field (I know that's counterintuitive given the theme) would help the image overall.
owenhaberf (Owen Haberfield) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like the concept of this shot - it's quite an original idea I think. I like the angles and the point of view you've chosen. I might have cropped this a little and experimented with a shallower depth of field. But all in all I really like this.
miniTotoro (Natalie) added a critique 1 year ago:
The placement of the sharpest area of focus seems a bit off to me. Maybe play around with cropping to see if it focal point might work better elsewhere?
Great detail on the brick though.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
For me this is a strange crop, but I like the work, nonetheless! Great work on the brick - texture and dof are outstanding.
Best,
Jon

by Jem
15 comments
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elijah (Greg Carrick) added a critique 1 year ago:
lots of detail, great framing of field and sky, nice sight lines - well done
ian (Ian Thomson) added a critique 1 year ago:
Normally I would think the tone mapping (i presume?) was a bit too much, but with this subject I think it works really well..
Love the view and angle here..
bluesforshoes (Jeremiah Gilbert) added a critique 1 year ago:
Wonderful angle. I agree with Brandon that it might be a little too over-processed, or at least looks like it. Also, it's a bit too much of the same grey for me. That said, it still is a striking photo.
diezel99 added a critique 1 year ago:
Very cool shot, nice clearity and colour. Good DOF.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 8 months ago:
Through its unreality, this shot conveys something of the magic of the game of baseball - very special image!
Best,
Jon

by beckn32
9 comments
shivahuja (shiv ahuja) added a critique 1 year ago:
very interesting perspective,a tighter crop would make it better I think.
mholmes (Mackenzie Holmes) added a critique 1 year ago:
I can't believe I've never seen this before. What a great idea, and a beautiful photograph!
mrsmorunion (Tammy Runion) added a critique 1 year ago:
Very cool idea, I love to take photos framed by something else and this is something I never would have thought of.
TheAntipodes (Menno van Zaanen) added a critique 1 year ago:
Wow, this is a really nice picture. The colours are warm and the extreme out-of-focus part of the image sets a nice frame for the in-focus part. I've seen pictures like this with pairs of glasses, but not with lenses before.
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 8 months ago:
amazing perspective...I love this photo! Great job!

by gembase
6 comments
THISMUG (Jeremy Yontz) added a critique 1 year ago:
I think the colors are great. The jet trail keeps attracting my eye as focal point.
charmarie (Char) added a critique 1 year ago:
I espically like the lower half of the photo, I would like to see what this photo would look like cropped.
mikeock (Mike Adams) added a critique 1 year ago:
Very nice.
the sun flowing through on the left really makes this shot pop.
TheAntipodes (Menno van Zaanen) added a critique 1 year ago:
I love the rays of the sun through the clouds, but I find the jet trail distracting. To me, it's like there's something like a scratch.
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 8 months ago:
I really like the "silver" lining to the clouds..good job!

by Faustina
5 comments
NeilSmith (Neil Smith) added a critique 1 year ago:
I don't want to come across as a sharpness-freak, but I do find the softness of the horses & their riders lessens my enjoyment of this image a *little*. I'm sure this was down to the conditions, it looks pretty murky.
I like the misty background, gives a sense of the conditions & adds to the depth of the image. I'm not sure about the riders' placement though. There's something that just feels a little awkward about it. I think it might be the right-most person/horse, if it was just the other three, I think the image would work better. I think it's the combination of the fact that they are on a different plane to the others (lagging behind) and that they are the other side of that tree that separates them from the group and leaves me feeling uncomfortable.
lbstone (Brandon Stone) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like the darkness of this (that's just something I personally enjoy.) It does look like this may have been saved at a really low JPG setting, though, which adds some compression artifacts, especially around the people... something I find distracting.
My biggest complaint would be that we're looking at the backs of heads. The back of the head is much less appealing to me than the front. Many times a back-of-the-head shot just leaves me flat and wanting more (unless there's a good reason for it.)
I'm not sure about the significance of the uprooted tree/stump/thing on the right. In the context of this photo I finding a little distracting. Not sure what it adds to the overall scene.
The composition feels basically right to me and I really like how the trees fade out into the mist. Seems like a fun trail and atmosphere to ride in.
charmarie (Char) added a critique 1 year ago:
I have to agree about the low compression of JPG,the B&W works here and the softness doesn't. I do like photos with a level of softness to them for effect but maybe this was a little overdone.
TheAntipodes (Menno van Zaanen) added a critique 1 year ago:
I agree with most of what's been said before. In this case, however, I don't mind looking at the backs of the heads as to me that's part of the story.
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 8 months ago:
I love the misty feel of this photo

by rogerramjet
10 comments
zenith9 (Bob and Jeannie) added a critique 1 year ago:
I love the motion in the clouds especially here.
thoughtdujour (thought du jour) added a critique 1 year ago:
ahhh...very simple and beautiful. I'm adding this to my favourite list. Did you post process with any filters or is that sky naturally pinkish and purplish?
rogerramjet said 1 year ago:
Naturally, this had a light blue tinge to it as it was well past sunset and there was little colour left in the sky (approx 30sec exposure). So yes, I did play about with some colour variations in photoshop and ended up using this version.
Sonoma added a critique 11 months ago:
Very smooth colors, I love it!
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:
Instant fave! Great comp and great colors! Very soothing effect.
Best,
Jon

by Sriram
6 comments
trancho (Bob Trancho) added a critique 1 year ago:
I like the composition with the cluster of bright edged leaves to the left, balanced by the darker area to the right.
Perhaps if you applied some selective sharpening to the area around large drop and petal...?
Naturespixel (Leisa Hennessy) added a critique 1 year ago:
nothing seems to be in perfect focus :(...
maybe try a different angle.. try getting down low you maybe able to get some reflection in the drops.. or try a tighter crop?? i am in love with teh colours tho :)
agme (Dmitry Antipov) added a critique 1 year ago:
problems with focus
average 'oh what a nice flower' shot
dcannaday added a critique 1 year ago:
I like this shot. Although I think it could use some sharpening on the petals.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:
Such pretty colors and a good composition. If only it were sharper!
Best,
Jon
This photo is one of the best photos in this topic! Brilliant use of DOF.