
by stilfoto
17 comments
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nrcowlishaw (Nathan Cowlishaw) added a critique 3 months ago:
mrraggedyandy added a critique 3 months ago:
I too agree that the person adds to the shot, rather than taking away. It places the shot in the real world, and give it perspective. Otherwise, it could have been a model...
Ludimaginary (Richard Vantielcke) added a critique 2 months ago:
A real Escher capture in the real world !
Incredible !
AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) added a critique 16 days ago:
¡¡¡Enhorabuena!!!!, he visto esta foto en la portada que Canon tiene para enviar sus noticias ("You connect").
HuubL added a critique 15 days ago:
Hey, I got this advertisement from Canon today. And they used your shot! I thought I had recently critiqued it here. Congrats!!

by Bastian
4 comments
breaves (Brennan Greaves) added a critique 1 month ago:
Great tones, the composition works well too. however I'm not sure it fits the topic
Smooch added a critique 29 days ago:
Nice tonal value and composition. A familiar scene to everybody. You've captured the clean lines and functional design quite well with a bit of humor by leaving the discarded paper in the image. It does look more contemporary rather than old though.
meyli added a critique 26 days ago:
Strong lines. I like these kind of usual scene transformed in art :)
boyd added a critique 15 days ago:
I agree - like the shot but am unsure of its place within the topic (door furniture looks too new). On a side note, I am sure that the tiler was happy with the plumber with the placement of the button - not only does it look annoyingly off-centre, it required cutting of 4 tiles ...

by FinaDay
5 comments
Ana (Ana Cortez) added a critique 1 month ago:
It certainly looks yummy. Was it?
I'd try and get that top/right corner fixed up so only the plate fills the space. Also, I'd probably leave a bit more room behind the cupcake, to the left, but otherwise it's good.
ambrosiastar (Ambrosia) added a critique 1 month ago:
That top right corner is the only thing that I can really see wrong with this picture. My eyes almost immediately move to it, although the sprinkles look good!!
I'm not quite sure what I would've done with the background; the pink tone gives a warmness to the picture (and definitely brings out the yummy looking frosting) but I would think there is a better background you could use... White would be too bright and wouldn't put the emphasis on the frosting anymore... maybe black, but then it would look like a bit of a flat picture... Tough one, I think you pulled it off well.
All the same, it looks very delicious!! :D
breaves (Brennan Greaves) added a critique 1 month ago:
I agree that the top right corner is a bit distracting, but it's nothing too serious. I love the colors and composition. Great shot!
pao_alfonso (Pao Alfonso) added a critique 29 days ago:
first of all... what a yummy shot. have you tried shooting the photo on a plate with a different color? maybe a soft shade of blue? maybe it would make the cupcake stand out some more.
erinelizzybeth (Erin) added a critique 20 days ago:
I agree about the top corner but other than that it's a great pic. It looks so good i just want to reach up and grab it off that plate! mmmmm!

by joka
3 comments
boyd added a critique 4 months ago:
I am not sure that this image and currently constructed works for me as a whole. I like the background and some other elements, but it misses something to really hold interest. Also, the larger square might be a bit too centred and "straight" to work within all of the other elements. Keep playing with this concept, however, because I feel it is going in an interesting direction.
breaves (Brennan Greaves) added a critique 4 months ago:
this seems a little overworked
Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 25 days ago:
Looks too flat and lacks a point of interest

by breaves
8 comments
breaves (Brennan Greaves) said 1 month ago:
Blown out highlights is a problem I have had on many occasions. Are there any tips you could suggest to help fix, or lessen it?
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 month ago:
@Brennan: That really depends on what type of camera you shoot with. If you shoot with a dslr that supports raw files, then shoot raw and you have a lot of control over the conversion, you can even make multiple conversions and blend them in post. If not, then see if your camera has a "backlighting" mode, sometimes that will help.
Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 1 month ago:
Consult some pages about HDRI photography - that's what you're looking for!
Good composition though. I think you should have moved the chair more to the left so you hadn't cut it off.
sanders (Marc Sanders) added a critique 1 month ago:
Also a cross processed look may have done the trick here. As far as HDR I would say that the window is such a small part of the overall effect that it does not need to be properly exposed unless somthing outside was so great it adds to the image like a local sign or indication like the HOLLYWOOD sign.
cvsuave (Chadler) added a critique 28 days ago:
This definitely has that abandonment feeling
great find!

by mikeock
9 comments
warreagle (Amy Warr) added a critique 1 month ago:
a second thought....losing some of the bottom makes him seem more stretched out...[discovered via scroll bar not showing whole pic at first]
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 1 month ago:
You´re right about the panorama-view. It builds some tension, wich in this case is the right thing.
cvsuave (Chadler) added a critique 1 month ago:
Super-Squirrel!!
you've got great reflexes to catch him!
breaves (Brennan Greaves) added a critique 1 month ago:
Nice work capturing that little guy
pao_alfonso (Pao Alfonso) added a critique 29 days ago:
nice action shot! i would, however, crop it a bit off at the bottom, but that's just me.

by sfkp
5 comments
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 2 months ago:
Is that you headed west??? Hope to see you in SoCal soon, check your email. I like the "God Rays"! The image feels tilted, runs downhill on the left? Hard to tell for sure, the pole look pretty straight, maybe it's just a downhill section of the road. This might be a good capture to try a little tone mapping using multiple raw converts. You do shoot raw with your new camera don't you. You could develop on image for the foreground and one for the sky and blend them with layer mattes in PS.
erinelizzybeth (Erin) added a critique 2 months ago:
I love the sunlight coming through the trees. Good picture!
Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 1 month ago:
love the rays
sfkp (Tamara) said 1 month ago:
Thanks to all of you. I shoot most of my pic's in raw, indeed. I don't have a real version of PS and the skills to blend two layer together, if I do some real photomanipulation I use a program that came with my scanner. When I buy a new computer (and I think I also need a new monitor) I'll buy myself a version of PS elements, too.
breaves (Brennan Greaves) added a critique 1 month ago:
beautiful capture

by charcoal
4 comments
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 1 month ago:
Nice idea. I like the structure of the glove and the shades on the glove. Only it's to bad I am distracted by the thought: what is that shiny metal object with the screw?!
If you're planning to make more pic's of this object, maybe you could lay down the glove on a smooth and shiny peace of metal without any other objects. A combination of the glove just alone with the brush is also logic becouse they are used together.
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 month ago:
This image is bizarre enough to hold a fair amount of interest/impact. The most distracting part for me is the dark counter showing at the top. I get the feeling that a finger is missing...
boyd added a critique 1 month ago:
I agree with the above comments. Although all the elements are there for a strong image, perhaps some simplification of the composition could be explored. I love the thinking behind this and find it most inspiring to start wandering around my house with camera in hand some more. Thanks for sharing.
breaves (Brennan Greaves) added a critique 1 month ago:
there is great detail here, it just lacks a focus

by Jordan
2 comments
bluechameleon (Sharon Wish) said 6 months ago:
Great perspective!
breaves (Brennan Greaves) said 1 month ago:
You've got the clouds down perfect. Great shot

by op_perrin
6 comments
juanantonio (J.A. Pellicer) added a critique 3 months ago:
Supongo que es una figura de un parque,jardin. Me gusta el angulo de toma y la gama tonal, por ese motivo creo que haber permitido ver un poco más del conjunto no hubiera estado mal. Supongo que no hacerlo obedece a que usted no lo consideró oportuno por algun motivo. De todas formas reciba mi felicitacion. Saludos
AmberDawn (Amber Sullivan) added a critique 3 months ago:
I really like this. The colors, tones and lighting are just great. It leaves me kinda wanting to see more of the front of the guitar, but then you'd probably lose the detail on the hand which is very interesting. I'd love to hear where this is and what it is made of! Do you have a pic somewhere of the whole thing? I'd like to see more of it.
warreagle (Amy Warr) added a critique 3 months ago:
Love the DOF
breaves (Brennan Greaves) added a critique 3 months ago:
brilliant textures and perfect depth of field
klimin_a_s (Andrew Klimin) added a critique 1 month ago:
Nice work!
Nice repetition here!