
by apsk121
5 comments
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 5 months ago:
hampshire added a critique 5 months ago:
Wouldn't mind getting stuck in traffic with this view!
ErikUnger (Erik Unger) added a critique 5 months ago:
Very nice light and color. Just get rid of that red light on the lower left, and maybe try to darken the two cars in front a bit and its perfect.
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 5 months ago:
Nice out-the-window shot, well done. I agree w/ others about the red dot.
GarrettHall (Garrett Hall) added a critique 4 months ago:
I agree with the others about the red light. If you darken the cars then I would also crop up to the bumper. But I think that if you can lighten up the top of the car in front of you, the reflection would add some nice detail to the bottom and avoid a big black bar at the bottom.

by apsk121
4 comments
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 5 months ago:
Nice minimal image, has a very nice tone and feel. I might have cropped a little be tighter. The large negative space on the right is not all that important.
ErikUnger (Erik Unger) added a critique 5 months ago:
Tis works for me. The tones are nice, particularly the blues on the outer edges. The vignette does a nice job of focusing in on the subject.
bradford (Bradford Levine) added a critique 4 months ago:
Gorgeous. I love this image. Looks like a tapestry or an oil painting. Great tone to it.
360Pixels (Ayash Basu) added a critique 4 months ago:
Dont think the black bands on the 2 sides are necessary, especially the right one. Other than that, good moody image. Nice work.

by apsk121
4 comments
sfkp (Tamara) added a critique 5 months ago:
Wow! The colours almost seems surrealistic. Did you pp it to get those colours? If you did, you did very well. But I don't think it fits in the topic. It isn't a portrait at all, you even have to look twice before seeing the human figure. I think 'the photographer' would be a better choice.
Another suggestion I have: I think it would add something extra if you were sitting down at the edge with your legs just straight ahead you (but maybe you hadn't enough time to do that... before the picture was taken with the self-exposure).
matiliberson added a critique 5 months ago:
I like the colors and the composition, but I think is a steady picture. Nice geometry of the blue, black and white
lasiate added a critique 5 months ago:
des couleurs années 50 , plus proche d'une abstraction que d'un portrait
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 5 months ago:
This is a wonderful subject as a cityscape and has great potential for a self-portrait. I just don't think this composition really works for either. As a cityscape/landscape you are distracting in the scene. The graphic nature of this and the surreal feel would make it a great shot for that genre if you were not there. For a self-portrait, you are there, but your sorta aren't too. Not sure all this makes sense.
Did you shoot this as a straight cityscape??

by apsk121
1 comment
HuubL said 5 months ago:
Great angle of the Golden Temple in Amritsar! Beautiful light as well.
Cool! Did you make this one on your way home in a traffic jam or something? Very nice one! Beatuiful colours. Only thing I would change is remove the red light with photoshop in the lower left corner.