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Rust (1 year ago)  

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duboaa (alex) added a critique 1 year ago:

Nice photo of rust. Nice warm colors. I like the texture.
But the doorknob is cropped by the frame...IMHO, a smaller focal lenght would be better, just to let breath the doorknob on the left...

PhotoDaniels (Stephanie Daniels) added a critique 1 year ago:

I agree with duboaa here. This is really nice - the colors are nice and warm! It's a bit distracting with just a hair of the door handle missing. Another idea is maybe shooting at a different angle a bit so the line of focus goes diagonally across the frame. Mix that with a touch more DOF and it would really make that rust stand out!!

TammyLynn (Tammy) added a critique 1 year ago:

Nice use of DOF, nice lighting, interesting subject. Part of the subject being cropped off ruins the whole photo for me. Actually the more I look at it the more the DOF looks off to me. Was the background blurred post processing?

Myke (Michael) added a critique 1 year ago:

Nice colours but I agree with above comments. Would be nice not to have cropped as tightly and a bit more focus would work well if possible.

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 year ago:

I agree about the framing would be better a little looser. I'm not sure I would have put this one in "Rust", there isn't really much rust on this, more of a patina I would call it. This might do better in "Shallow DOF".

rdavs (Rhonda Spencer) added a critique 1 year ago:

My mind questions the doorknob handle falling out of the frame to the left, the slight bit that is missing draws my eye. And now for the positive- the warm colors are wonderful and the subject matter is interesting.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 10 months ago:

This just misses being a great capture. Great colors and decent composition. The lower portion of the photo leaves something to be desired.

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