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Glass (1 year ago)
elijah (Greg Carrick) added a critique 1 year ago:
lbstone (Brandon Stone) added a critique 1 year ago:
The tilt of the composition is unconventional... I like unconventional, but it feels a little awkward to me here. In this context, I keep thinking that the vase is going to fall off to the left. If you were going for a kind of vertigo feeling, I think you've achieved it... although, I'm not sure what it really adds to the image. I would probably focus more on the light and the colors, rather than adding the tilt.
Also, it looks like you've created some halos from sharpening (around the plant leaves in the upper left.) Some people might consider that distracting.
I do like the nice deep blue color and the lighting. Definitely a subject worth exploring.
gurimehta added a critique 1 year ago:
Something about the colors is really beautiful here. I like the angle. I like the colors and hues on the background wall. The shape of the plant frames the left nicely. Really creative.
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interesting, although the vase seems to be sitting up there and feels unsupported...