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Bastian (Bastian Löhrer) added a critique 1 year ago:

Looks interesting, and green.
I just have some trouble with identifying the subject. It looks like water(drops) (frozen?) on a plant.

guffy (Stefan Karlstrom) added a critique 1 year ago:

I am also having trouble finding out what the subject really is. But thats all good. Looks like some type of grass with rain or frozen water drops on it.

I like the abstractness of it all. But maybe the bottom part should be cropped out, or reframed so you get a more heads on capture, now the bottom part is a little further away from the lens, and a little bit darker.

delphE (delphinE Le Berre) added a critique 1 year ago:

I love that point of vue, like a little forest from the sky, but for me there is nothing sharp enough to catch the eye.

SeekingFocus (Jason Langley) said 1 year ago:

Hi everyone!

Thanks for your comments and critiques!

This was meant mostly as an abstraction, hence the lack of a real focal point. This is a photo of moss with water drops resting on it from the morning dew. I think also in the original version it was a bit sharper, but the resized web version lacked this clarity...

jaska (Jari Hakala) added a critique 1 year ago:

Nice pattern. I would have cropped much tighter. Concentrate on the large droplets and cut edges off.

Helene (Hélène Douchet) added a critique 1 year ago:

Amazing point of vue. Hard to know if it's taken from the sky (forest) or if it's grass or something smaller.

caryscott (Cary Scott) added a critique 1 year ago:

Wow, that's moss? I actually looked at this for a while and figured it must be a small shrub. I had no idea that moss looked like this up close. Good job and I think the crop is fine. I don't think the water drops are as interesting as how it seems like you're looking down on a forest. Good job.

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