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Uploaded by Paulforrester - 12 comments - Topic: Out My Window (1 year ago)  


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Out My Window (1 year ago)  

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Sher (Sher Hilliard) added a critique 1 year ago:

Awesome. I want YOUR window.

Sher (Sher Hilliard) added a critique 1 year ago:

Shoot..in my defense I loved the photo so much, I forgot to add my "constructive critism." I love it. I wouldn't change a thing.

Paulforrester (Paul Forrester) said 1 year ago:

thanks Sher, it was my window in malaysia-it was a nice window to have!

Pi-Production (Eric Rousset) added a critique 1 year ago:

I like the view Paul but not the black left part...

forgingahead (Bob Foss) added a critique 1 year ago:

One element of this shot that I really like is the different way the light passes through the glass on the window itself, creating a step-like effect. It might be nice to have closed the window a little bit more to accentute that effect.

SeekingFocus (Jason Langley) added a critique 1 year ago:

lovely shot, though the framing is just a bit off. I wish I could see more of the left side (instead of a solid black line). With just a little more context on that side of the image, this could be really great!

kamaki (Christophe) added a critique 1 year ago:

I agree with Piproduction about the black left par of the frame.

Sher (Sher Hilliard) added a critique 1 year ago:

I see nothing wrong with the "black left frame." As this category is "Through My Window" I think it quite appropriate to have both the left edge of the window and the glass.

bokeh-junior (Ed Simons) added a critique 1 year ago:

I don't think the black frame detracts from the image, it increases the sense of being indoors and looking out.

My main criticism is that the horizon is a bit wonky, and I think the left island should have some sea to the left.

I like it and wish I was on holiday again.

guffy (Stefan Karlstrom) added a critique 1 year ago:

The black towards the left is needed. However, I also think that the horizon is a bit "wonky" and should be corrected as it is very distracting.

aldamir (di Carlo Darsa sandro) added a critique 1 year ago:

Sea is not right :( This is a minimum in a "sea photography". Composition is perfect to me, I like it a lot.

erinelizzybeth (Erin) added a critique 1 year ago:

I love this. I love that the window is blurry and i like the color of the window too!

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