Uploaded by Paulforrester - 6 comments - Topic: Solitude (1 year ago)
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Solitude (1 year ago)
dcrphotography (Daniel) added a critique 1 year ago:
manickavelu (velu) added a critique 1 year ago:
i agree with drcphotography.
if you crop from the top & left, you might get a better effect.
adisdjapo (Adis Djapo) added a critique 1 year ago:
I have to agree with the previous comment. Too centered. And also I don't like the way you can tell it was either cropped out from a wider photo or digitally zoomed in.
codystanley (Cody Stanley) added a critique 1 year ago:
While I like the idea of a dead center(no man's land) subject to express this topic, I'm afraid the image is not strong enough for that cropping.
gazdi (Csaba Bobák) added a critique 1 year ago:
I also have to agree it's too centered. Placing the gull off-center and leaving much more room around it would help conveying the feelings of solitude.
jaapv added a critique 1 year ago:
I agree with the previus posters. Although the "rules" of composition are made to be broken, this was not the occasion imo.
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IMO, the composition is too centered.