good framing. You need a little fine tuning for the white in the background.

This is a very nice, moody portrait, but the white halo is a bit distracting. Also, I think that the super sharpened/saturated eyes are a bit much. I like the effect, but it could be toned down a little in my opinion.

mmmh i like the eyes, cool affect! but yes i agree with the white in the backround, it's like saying less is more and i'm guessing you tried real hard to make this one have it, if you know what i mean. heard about your knew flash, way to go, excited to see some more pictures now! :)

mmmh i like the eyes, cool effect! but yes i agree with the white in the backround, it's like saying less is more and i'm guessing you tried real hard to make this one have it, if you know what i mean. heard about your new flash, way to go, excited to see some more pictures now! :)

Thanks for the most comments and critic! i try to make it better

There is nothing for making better. Then its just perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I love the strong eye and the white background brings life into the composition.

Excellent photo - leave the halo - it works in this context!

Best,
Jon