gee, where are all the comments?
Well here's mine!
This guy is totally hot, and this is what makes the image =D
great shot bro!

I think it is a very good shot...but in terms of constructive comment, I think it could have a touch less contrast (the lower forehead and nose would look less "oily", and the whites of the eyes a little less unnatural). I would also be tempted to clone out the light object over his left shoulder, which is distracting.

I agree with the above about the cloning and I would also do without the slight red blush. I like the expression and energy of his face.

I really like the sweaty, greasy look mentioned above. I would have to agree with getting rid of that object behind him though, and maybe try to get some definition between the person and the background.

too much contrast and boring central composition
try to crop it to squre probably

I really like this portrait, but the object to the right is distracting. It makes me think of the finger of death pointing at this young man. Other than that it is fantastic.

i agree with the comments above. cropping the right side might help...but the shot itself is nice

Could have done without the red, I agree, but awesome shot!

The object to the right is very distracting. This is a good portrait, but just misses being great.

Best,
Jon