too much contrast and boring central composition
try to crop it to squre probably

I really like this portrait, but the object to the right is distracting. It makes me think of the finger of death pointing at this young man. Other than that it is fantastic.

i agree with the comments above. cropping the right side might help...but the shot itself is nice

Could have done without the red, I agree, but awesome shot!

The object to the right is very distracting. This is a good portrait, but just misses being great.

Best,
Jon

mmmh i like the eyes, cool affect! but yes i agree with the white in the backround, it's like saying less is more and i'm guessing you tried real hard to make this one have it, if you know what i mean. heard about your knew flash, way to go, excited to see some more pictures now! :)

mmmh i like the eyes, cool effect! but yes i agree with the white in the backround, it's like saying less is more and i'm guessing you tried real hard to make this one have it, if you know what i mean. heard about your new flash, way to go, excited to see some more pictures now! :)

Thanks for the most comments and critic! i try to make it better

There is nothing for making better. Then its just perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I love the strong eye and the white background brings life into the composition.

Excellent photo - leave the halo - it works in this context!

Best,
Jon

It is really hard not to love a picture of a kid. They make such great subjects.

I think you did an excellent job on this pic. It does appear just a little too over exposed on the right side, but it is still a great picture.

The eyes are great, but they look a little fake...

Otherwise, I like the shot

Although the photo does look like the highlights are blown, I feel that the connection that i make with this child because of her smile is just wonderful. I forget about the negatives as the smile and the eyes are wonderful.

The eyes draw me in, however they look a bit unrealistic to me, and the right side of the face is a little over exposed, but I really like this photo. Again, I see the eyes get sucked in and don't focus on the right side at all.

i love this pic. i love the eyes and there clearness. i love the black background. and i love the high contrast. good job

Incredible! What a great shot!

realy too dark.
movement is hard to understand
water is perfect ! realy perfect !
white balance is realy good too :)

musst mir mal noch erzählen wie du des gemacht hast und wie nah du wirklich warst. Gratuliere für den Stern :)

This one's one of my faves from the topic. I enjoy these types of human interaction shots.

Fantastic idea, but the execution needs improvement: it's too dark and the background does not make the water 'pop'.

I like this shot. I would like to see it lightened up just a bit.

I like this, reminds me of one of those "motivation" posters that you see in the catalogs.

I like drops photography. I agree Sher, for the lightness.
Nice shot, however