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by MomentsinTime
1 comment

MomentsinTime (Pete Brennan) said 3 months ago:

This is composed from five shots. It was stiched together using CS3. What a great program CS3 is for this type of work!

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by Ana
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Ana (Ana Cortez) said 7 months ago:

Thank you, Ana.
The fog and morning light gave everything a blue tint.

philippe (Philippe Reichert) said 7 months ago:

I like the location you chose and how the fence "runs" through the picture. The winter (lack of)light creates a great atmosphere. The photo would be cool, even without the effect, but it certainly adds something and fits perfectly the action.

MomentsinTime (Pete Brennan) said 7 months ago:

Very cool photo, Ana! Nice job!

eziler said 7 months ago:

Great sense of movement here, good lines and just the right amount of detail. Well done.

One suggestion; croping just a tad off of the right would improve balance.

bluechameleon (Sharon Wish) said 5 months ago:

Simply amazing! I would love a lesson in how you did this. Brava!

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by mva1985
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Nynke (Nynke Wierda) added a critique 1 year ago:

I personally wouldn't worry about the horizon - it looks like they're on a bit of a slope anyway. I looked straight at their faces so didn't notice the blown-out highlights immediately, but now everyone else has mentioned them...

beckn32 (Kim Norton) added a critique 1 year ago:

I really enjoy how you've "blown" out the highlights since to me, it really makes me focus on their faces. I'm constantly drawn to what is (after much concentration) the left girls shoe in the air. It's distracting and looks a little out of place with the processing.

mva1985 (Chris Grant) said 1 year ago:

Kim, Thanks for the comment. I never really paid that much attention to the shoe but I think you have a good point.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Great shot - even with the blown highlights! Thanks for sharing.

Cheers,
Jon

narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 8 months ago:

the expressions are very intriuging..very nice shot!

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by melissahl
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melissahl (Melissa Hernandez) said 1 year ago:

Thanks for your comments guys! Well, actually this is a self-portrait. I was playing a bit with the camera. The only light on was the one from my nightstand. Thanks again!

MomentsinTime (Pete Brennan) added a critique 1 year ago:

Strong eyes! Very nice especially for a self portrait!

eggplant (Matt) added a critique 1 year ago:

I like the grain, the tight crop, the black blacks. In fact, I would burn in completely the extraneous stuff around your face to complete black.

TheAntipodes (Menno van Zaanen) added a critique 1 year ago:

Obviously, what the other people said: the eyes are really strong. I'm not so convinced about the grainy picture, I think it's a little bit too much. Especially the graininess of the background is a bit too light. If you look at this picture from a distance, it's not really noticable and looks much better.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Great eyes and great dimples - too grainy - not necessary in a shot like this - really distracts from a great face!

Best,
Jon

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by MomentsinTime
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photomaniac (Ovidiu Tutunaru) added a critique 1 year ago:

Good portrait! Maybe a wider crop...

LifesMoments (Allison) added a critique 1 year ago:

Wow, this is a really cool shot!

Sonoma added a critique 11 months ago:

Nice, great shot, pretty model. Vivid color.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Nice comp. and like the crop as well - super job with your model.

Best,
Jon

remirol (Andy Lorimer) added a critique 9 months ago:

Great shot, nice colour balance!!

Andy

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by nattfodd
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nattfodd (Alexandre Buisse) said 1 year ago:

@kadenajack: actually, the bird was in a state of shock. It had just been chased by a falcon and had barely escaped. For a couple of minutes, it was standing there without any reaction, but then came back to reality and flew off. It was quite an experience.

Your crop is a good idea, I shall try it. What saddens me is that I'll lose the bare feet of the girl, which I think add a lot to the composition.

@doilyboy: you're right that it's not supposed to be a portrait. Actually, I don't really know what it's supposed to be :)

ArneG (Arne Gulstene) added a critique 1 year ago:

I agree that cropping is required here - but perhaps you can get away with just below the feet - cropping at the top of the frame here is pretty much a must as I find my eye distracted by the upper portion.

MomentsinTime (Pete Brennan) added a critique 1 year ago:

Very nice photo. I think a tighter crop would make it a little better.

kyla (Kyla) added a critique 1 year ago:

I like the story that this pictures tells- the girl is so captivated by the bird, you can feel her worry. A little tighter crop would benefit.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 9 months ago:

Great shot and story - I wouldn't crop it if it means losing the girl's feet!

Best,
jon

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by Jhill
2 comments

MomentsinTime (Pete Brennan) said 10 months ago:

WOW!! This is a great shot!! Well done!!

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) said 10 months ago:

Agree, very pretty. The diagonal dark cloud transition in the upper sky feels odd and heavy, not sure if there is anything you could do to make it feel more gradual/softer to match better the feels of the rest of the sky?

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by MomentsinTime
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mrsmorunion (Tammy Runion) said 11 months ago:

Great capture! This is an amazing photo! Congrats!

dcrphotography (Daniel) said 11 months ago:

cool stop motion.

Eye_See said 11 months ago:

Exceptional photograph.

tkwhite (Kathryn White) said 11 months ago:

Great job getting this shot! Couldn't have planned it any better!

MomentsinTime (Pete Brennan) said 10 months ago:

Thanks for all of the comments! I have sent a copy of this to Mikasa to see if they were interested it.

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by eli
2 comments

MomentsinTime (Pete Brennan) added a critique 1 year ago:

Very nice! I would have cropped the image so that the left side of the window was straight up and down. The colors are very nice!

D1N0 (Marc) added a critique 11 months ago:

I'm distracted by the Cross, the red carpet and floating thing in the foreground. Less is more!

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by Jhill
2 comments
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tkwhite (Kathryn White) said 11 months ago:

I think this is the best i've seen Memphis look! Great job, congrats!
I still beat you in being featured!

MomentsinTime (Pete Brennan) said 11 months ago:

Nice capture! Very nice shot! Congrats on the feature!

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