Uploaded by BrianJones - 10 comments - Topic: Detail of music (9 months ago)
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MMeye (Martine) said 8 months ago:
BrianJones (Brian Jones) said 8 months ago:
Thanks MMeye. Yeah I do agree, I was actually contemplating recreating the shot to bring a little more in focus in general. Thanks for your input!
PS. The two wheels are the "Pitch" and "Modulation" wheels.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 8 months ago:
Brian,
Your tones are good, but the overall comp is too heavily weighted on the left side, in my opinion. The bokeh on the far right edge of the photo is a little distracting.
Best,
Jon
mikeock (Mike Adams) added a critique 8 months ago:
Very good.
I like the toning here..
Great still life concept here!
I agree with the focus that was discussed above.
I also think that the composition is weighted to heavy to the left. I think also moving the focus a bit toward the right would make the composition feel a bit more balanced!
BrianJones (Brian Jones) said 8 months ago:
Jon and Mike,
Thanks for the input. I see what your saying, and I'll try to fix this up in my retake of the shot. Moving the focus to the right a bit I think would definitly help it a lot out. Thanks for the ideas!
boyd added a critique 8 months ago:
I like the casual composition to this shot which makes it very engaging. Although I like the tones as is, it would be interesting to play around with this type of shot to try and control the highlights on the keys and see what it does to the rest of the subject. Well seen.
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 8 months ago:
The image does have a strong tonal range but suffers from the highlight being quite blown out. I also think the DoF could have been better placed. The main subject is the keyboard, the headphone are the sharpest focus.
BrianJones (Brian Jones) said 8 months ago:
Ah! Both very good ideas Boyd and Clyde! Thanks so much. Unfortunately, I still haven't gotten around to re shooting this. *sigh*
deagles added a critique 8 months ago:
Nice shot - sometimes difficult to get in b&w. I agree with Beamer, the DOF is a bit off .. particularly lost in the white keys & highlights on the right.
mosesport (Moses) added a critique 7 months ago:
Awesome shot! Makes me wanna pick up the headphones and rock out in my head. :)
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Oh, YES !!
I love the tones and the framing.
I just wish the 2 'wheels' (sorry I don't have the right word) in the foreground had been in the focus zone.