
by Jessa
4 comments
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 11 months ago:
Jessa said 11 months ago:
lol sorry to subject you to another kitty Beamer :)
I agree the blown out area is distracting.. thanks for the idea.. I'll play around with it
alira (Arkaitz Lira) added a critique 11 months ago:
Great moment, i love cats.
It only could be better if we could see some air over the cat.
See you.
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:
Geat capture! Clyde's suggestion is exactly right - a healthy crop would very much strengthen this shot.
Best,
Jon

by Jessa
7 comments
D1N0 (Marc) added a critique 11 months ago:
Nice, the dark patch in the left upper corner is a bit distracting. What if you'd crop it to a perfect square?
Jessa said 11 months ago:
Thanks D1N0, square might be the trick. I was/am a little concerned with losing the little peaks of orange-ish light on the waves.
DavidBaute (David Baute) added a critique 10 months ago:
Very nice... Deep color I love it!
jellybino (Robyn Shaw) added a critique 9 months ago:
Such wonderful color!
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 8 months ago:
Gorgeous feel and color - I would def. crop this to a square - easy and effective fix. Great work.
Best,
Jon

by Jessa
3 comments
boyd added a critique 10 months ago:
Nice composition using this type of crop that is very well balanced. I like the depth of field and the fact that you got the main bird to perform tricks - great sense of fun.
juanantonio (J.A. Pellicer) added a critique 10 months ago:
Acertada fotografia para el tema, creo que es destacable el encuadre de los dos sujetos, uno en movimiento el otro no. Me gusta esta fotografia aunque creo que los dos pajaros de atrĂ¡s no aportan nada a la composicion ya la vista queda atrapada en el primer sujeto. Enhorabuena. Saludos
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 10 months ago:
Love the colors and the composition is good. Very interesting vertical!

by Jessa
1 comment
aloha_photo (Jeff Sisemoore) added a critique 10 months ago:
This could be my eyes, but it looks to me that the focus is a bit soft at the point of the bird's head and chest. It appears that the sharpest point of focus is on sand behind the bird. Was this part of a larger photo that was cropped down to include only this bird? In any event I think it would be improved with a sharper focus on his head and chest feathers.

by Jessa
1 comment
Jessa said 10 months ago:
The eads bridge in St. Louis, Mo. 1 of my first attempts at hand held panos

by Jessa
1 comment
Jessa said 10 months ago:
previous version posted under frost and snow, I just cloned out some distracting lines

by Jessa
7 comments
CodeRed (Cody Redmon) added a critique 11 months ago:
I agree with Beamer regarding dark patch in the lower-right corner and cutting off the left side, but rather like the shot otherwise. I live in Montana and this is just rough native and mtn. man style, it's familiar and works for me. A little more light on his face would have been cool. Thanks for submitting, Jessa.
alira (Arkaitz Lira) added a critique 11 months ago:
Hi Jessa,
Is a nice photo, i dont really find distracting the dark area in the lower right, but i would like to see the whole antler thats what i really think that distracts the attention. Next time try to put the subject in one piece inside the photography, dont cut it, take care with that and then dont forget to erase distracting dark areas too.
See you!
boyd added a critique 10 months ago:
I have to agree that for me it seems more about the dream catcher and less about the man, although the man does add drama etc. I particularly like the use you have made of the depth of field to bring the subject forward. Overall, very pleasing to me.
Jessa said 10 months ago:
Thanks for the help everyone and all the nice comments :)
I hadn't really thought about it until you mentioned it Beamer & Boyd, it is more about the dreamcatcher. When posting, I was torn between portrait of a person of shot with a story. Hmmm perhaps it would have worked better in the latter.
Sonoma added a critique 10 months ago:
Very interesting shot. Nice.

by Jessa
8 comments
boyd added a critique 11 months ago:
I have to agree that this is a very striking shot ... right down to the beautiful reflections in the bulb and its reflections. Well done.
Jessa said 11 months ago:
Thank you Eye_See and boyd.
My concern is maybe the grass and the wall of the fountain behind might be distracting. perhaps an all black background would be more effective, or maybe I've just looked at it too long.
selaux (Sarah) added a critique 11 months ago:
I didnt even notice the backround at first but once you mentioned it, I can see your concern. However, I think the wall in particular adds another interesting line.
Jessa said 11 months ago:
thanks selaux, I recently tried it all black and didn't like it so looks like the line stays. I appreciate the help
blaze883r (Fernando Bordallo) added a critique 10 months ago:
Lovely shot! The reflection is very sharp, and the "reflected reflection", too! XD
Beautiful colours, and textures. I like it very much.

by Jessa
3 comments
lolly (lolly smits) said 11 months ago:
Nice abstract feel to it. Like the light coming through the snow on the left. :~)))
Jessa said 11 months ago:
thanks lolly!
Looking at this again, I think I need to clone out the whatever those out of focus lines are in the upper right hand side of the frame.
lolly (lolly smits) said 11 months ago:
To me they look a bit like blurred tree branches, or something like that; in fact, I thought you may have added them!! Clone out with glee...

by Jessa
2 comments
Jessa said 11 months ago:
I really loved the sky this afternoon. I think this image is probably a bit over processed and perhaps I should have straightened the bottom but I couldn't resist.
Eye_See said 11 months ago:
Wonderful cloudscape. You are right, straightening the bottom would improve the overall look. But it is still a good photo.
Awwww, another cat shot, I could have done without that today...:) I like the moment you have captured with the tongue in action, the bright white/pink thing in the foreground is distracting. Maybe a tight square crop?? to just show the face and tongue.