I like the imagination of this!! Strange collection, but holds a lot of interest.

Works for me as well - love the overall feeling and effect - nice job lighting this one.

Best,
jon

A little wider would have been much better IMO. Other than that makes for a good black and white shot!

Great face and great hands! The bokeh, while beautiful, ultimately distracts from the subject. The crop is a little tight around the man's wristwatch, in my opinion. I like the photo very much.

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Jon

I like this a lot. The distracting top is made worse by the negative space above the lights. Hard to avoid the lights but you could crops off all the dark above the lights and it would be better.

I like this shot a lot, particularly the fact that you have looked "in" and made subjects of the people when they are all looking "out" seeing a subject elsewhere. The cut off bloke doesn't bother me because it suggests that there is more of the same gong on outside this frame. Great tones too, well done.

I agree this works well in B&W and is a great people shot. As for loosing the man on the left, I think you would have also lost the guy above him. This would have spoilt the 'buzy' nature of the shot.

Lovely contrasts, works great in b&w.

Great capture - the man on the far left is an unnecessary distraction, however, and takes away from a great shot.

Best,
Jon

I agree with jon about the man, but the crispness is great, and it feels like a real action shot.

nice depth!

very good, people don't take many photos of cigarettes packs in my opinion. I like it very much

Great photo. My only nit is that the crop on the bottom is just nipping the corner of the pack of smokes. This seems like an error as opposed to purposefull.

Beautiful colors :)

Kind of not pc, i guess - nonetheless, love it - great shot.

Best,
Jon

I LOVE this image. It is minimalism at it's best and it is eloquent.