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Solitude (1 year ago)  

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Beam_er (Brent) added a critique 1 year ago:

The only thing I can think to have done different is to have had the chair more on the opposite side of the frame. I think it would have tied into the picture better rather than looking out of the frame, so to speak. I like the foggy atmosphere and the great contrast.

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 year ago:

There is something a little off about the composition, but not sure what it is..

I think the other Beam_er's comment is probably caused by the gap in the decking. If that weren't there the facing of the chair would not feel of odd. I actually like the chair facing out of frame. It bothers me a little that the lower chair leg breaks the edge of the frame and that the upper arm just touches the float thing in the water. But, these are small things.

Love the tones and the overall feel of the pic.

mjmilloy (M-J Milloy) added a critique 1 year ago:

I like it, it's certainly a nice, evocative scene. My complaints? The chair seems a bit muddy... maybe a bit underexposed? Not adequately sharp? It seems like it's missing some necessary detail. Also, I think the impact would be better if the chair's silhouette was better defined, ie. by getting rid of that buoy and keep all of the chair in the frame. Still, good work!

willie_901 (william) added a critique 1 year ago:

Nicely empty. I like this. I think the very foreground of the chair's arm is just out of focus, but it's hard to tell.

I think I would like to see this shot from a view where the camera was to the right and a bit further away from the chair.

ties (Ties Dufraing) added a critique 1 year ago:

great picture for the topic! makes me think of that movie 'the notebook'.

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