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Uploaded by AnaGaztelu - 9 comments - Topic: cemeteries (7 months ago)  


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jcniguez (José Carlos Ñíguez) added a critique 7 months ago:

Interesante composición Ana. El blanco y negro junto con las texturas de la cruz y el muro, así como el cielo, le dan mayor dramatismo. Para mi gusto hubiera clonado las insinuaciones de las dos cruces del fondo, que no aportan nada y distraen. Excelente fotografia.

ScottCrouse (Scott Crouse) added a critique 7 months ago:

Ana, the composition and subject are very nice. The only problem is the sensor dust. If you have Photoshop or a similar tool it should have a healing brush and you can remove the dust spots. You've got a very good eye, just need to work on cleaning up the images a bit. Just tiny stuff.

AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) said 7 months ago:

¡¡Qué fallo!! Suelo revisar ese tipo de cosas pero esta vez se me han escapado...Gracias Scott.
Gracias también José Carlos, estoy de acuerdo en que las cruces del fondo no aportan pero aún estoy verde en el tema de la clonación.
Hasta pronto.

refocus (andy kämpf) added a critique 7 months ago:

Composition is perfect. i like the cross in the middle. it adds mood to it.

lasiate added a critique 7 months ago:

photo mystique. oui il faut nettoyer la poussière sur ses vieilles croyances ;) et sur la photo

misu (Mikhail Palinchak) added a critique 7 months ago:

Great subject, composition and contrast! Well done!

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 7 months ago:

Beautiful, the inclusion of the "extra" object in the left half of frame is a bit distracting. The image would probably be stronger without. It would be a difficult clone job given the silky nature of the sky behind. My real complaint is the blown out highlights, especially behind the large foreground cross. Do you shoot raw? If so then you should be able to get the details back from this area and "multiply" them back in.

Overall, this is a striking image and I am glad you shared it!

AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) said 7 months ago:

Gracias a todos por las críticas y comentarios.
Clyde: Ahora hago todas mis fotos en RAW y la diferencia es notable. Intentaré arreglar esta toma como me indicas. Gracias de nuevo.
Hasta pronto.

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 7 months ago:

Great photo - i love it!

Saludos,
jon

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