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B&W Flower (10 months ago)
lolly (lolly smits) added a critique 10 months ago:
Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 10 months ago:
I agree with Lolly, the composition is unbalanced. This subject would feel a lot better if there was more context/room at the top and cut off about half the negative space at the bottom. The flower could use some "noseroom" on the right also. Also, the image is soft overall, some area of the flower should be in tack focus.
AnaGaztelu (Ana Gaztelu) said 10 months ago:
Muchas gracias, seguiré trabajando para mejorar.
Hasta pronto
boyd added a critique 10 months ago:
Ana, I agree with lolly and Clyde on this one regarding the composition. I think that the subject is very nice and your treatment of it is very engaging - perhaps a square frame taken from the top (cropping the space at the bottom) would work better?
jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 10 months ago:
Ana,
This is an outstanding photograph. Your composition is spot on - don't change a thing. Lovely work.
Best,
Jon
narnold (Noah Arnold) added a critique 9 months ago:
I think this picture is great! I love the softness of it...I agree about croping out just a little off the bottom...amazing photo nonetheless
DREED added a critique 9 months ago:
I like the space at the bottom.....The reason being The flower is leading to the space.....love the softness
Nice shot
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Lovely soft rendition, but my eye is drawn immediately to the dark leaves to the left of the flower and is a huge distraction. As well, I'm not too sure about having so much space at the bottom, it's about the flower after all. But, I do like very much the perspective of the flower itself and would like to get in a bit closer at that angle. Saludos. :o)