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Featured 11 Months Ago barns & windmills (1 year ago)  

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Ana (Ana Cortez) said 1 year ago:

I am hoping to receive feedback on the b/w conversion.
This barn is FULL of colour and maybe I'll post a colour version later. But for now, I'd like to know if I could do better with tones and shadows and stuff.
Thanks!

Beamer (Clyde Beamer) added a critique 1 year ago:

Hey, I like this one, the tilted part looks like the silo is holding it up. Here comes my most common comment: it does look a little flat, which given the sky is not all that bad a thing. Maybe just a little more brightness in the highlights. There are many subjects where you don't need to have pure white to pure black, but an outdoor building shot like this sorta needs more punch, IMHO.

Laurie (Laurie) added a critique 1 year ago:

I think it needs a bit more contrast. I do love the subject here. It looks ancient.

oz_sprog (Will Williams) added a critique 1 year ago:

I agree with the contrast maybe also something to separate the background from the foreground, no idea what it would be though.

dcannaday added a critique 1 year ago:

Enjoy this photo very much.. It seems a bit surreal! Very nice.

hampshire added a critique 1 year ago:

Love this photo! It feels as if the barn is moving. Wish I was there to see it! Great job!

mikeock (Mike Adams) added a critique 1 year ago:

Great job with this capture.
The tones could lose a little punch but they are not bad as is.
Would love to see the color version!

Ana (Ana Cortez) said 1 year ago:

Hi, thank you all so much for the great feedback on this shot.
I've been working a lot with b/w and trying to get the tones correctly done.
I'm going to post the colour version now!

Sonoma added a critique 1 year ago:

I'm not sure. I think the flat tones add to the fact that this place is in such decrepid condition and can never be restored. I like it as it is.

pete (Pete) added a critique 11 months ago:

i think the conversion is good. i do wish the white barn walls were a little whiter though. As everyone else has said, its tough with that sky!

jvgphoto (jon van gilder) added a critique 10 months ago:

Wow - instant fave. Super shot!

Best,
Jon

Ana (Ana Cortez) said 10 months ago:

Thank you! I shot this from a busy expressway (car stopped at the side of the road).
I'm pretty sure it was illegal.
:P

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